June

JUNE It was a strong wind A swath across the country May went out with a mighty hot exhalation Sitting here in a synthesis of senses I welcome June she of the powder-sweet presence There will be a tarnish or two I know She is no bleating lamb makes no apologies for her early fame After a bitter winter the torrent of spring I welcome her like the soothing Goddess she is

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/7/2011 7:19:00 PM

The perfect month and the perfect poem to give her the recognition she deserves. Well written.

Zzzzz Zzzzz

Date: 6/20/2011 1:28:00 AM

Nice personification of the month of June. Good use of sibilant alliteration in line Four! A good, creative write. Regards, Robert.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2011 8:52:00 AM

Lovely way to welcome June :) Wonderful way to depict this month :) enjoyed reading this one, Dave --over here June is actually a rainy month so reading your June is so refreshing :D hugs :)

Constance La France

Date: 6/7/2011 3:39:00 PM

I love your style, Sir daver, just amazing what you do with words~~

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/7/2011 3:11:00 PM

a charming hello to june, the other half of the year, daver... really goood stuff! :) huggs, nette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/6/2011 9:56:00 PM

daver, June is not at her best right now,but yesterday it FINALLY felt like summer and was our warmest day all year so far. Is your June turning out good? She sure can be welcoming, that's for sure!! glad to see this new post from you. Andrea

Daver Austin
Date: 6/7/2011 11:27:00 AM

So far June is lovely, however it is 92 today and promises 94 tomorrow. LOve, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/6/2011 9:02:00 PM

June here is very hot ..gonna be 100 next four days but I just luv it.. Daver.. a cool write about tow of my fav months.. May .. super ..June.. awesome just like u my friend..luv..

Daver Austin
Date: 6/7/2011 11:29:00 AM

Yep. We have it too. 92 today and promises 94 tomorrow. Fortunately, I am down in weight, so the heat doesn't bother me quite as much. Love, daver

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 6/6/2011 2:40:00 PM

A lovely write, Daver! June is often overlooked by us.:( Warm, mellow and well deserving of this tribute. Yesterday we planted vegetales and herbs in the garden. The soil was warm and embracing...will make the plants happy, for sure! So wishing the best to you and yours! Love, Mikki

Daver Austin
Date: 6/7/2011 11:31:00 AM

Check your mail. Love, daver

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/6/2011 11:18:00 AM

I can truly sense your pleasure of welcoming June, Daver. Winter months seem best where I live, but everyone else will join you in worshipping the "soothing Goddess." As for Jolie -- her beauty is stunning, lips and all. Envy builds within... Love, Carolyn

James Foulk

Date: 6/6/2011 11:09:00 AM

Daver this was a great piece of well written poetry.