June 1

opening blossoms greet the rain with bowing heads praying for sunshine

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/6/2010 4:31:00 PM

I really liked the contrasts you put here, Joyce--& those bowing heads sure was a very nice touch :)--nikko :)

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 6/2/2010 3:57:00 PM

There is an implied balance between wet and dry that I like that fits with very austere nature of the form. Thank you for your kind remarks. Regards, Gerard.

Mac Mcgovern

Date: 6/2/2010 12:41:00 PM

Superb, The essence of your poem fills the room with the aroma of new life in spring.

De R

Date: 6/1/2010 2:22:00 PM

Sweet haiku...Wonderful writing! Emily

Jesu Johnson

Date: 6/1/2010 10:09:00 AM

I LOVE IT!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2010 9:30:00 AM

to much to expect this month, love your nature way of expressing june is here,..Sidney Lee Ann M.=p.d.

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/1/2010 9:30:00 AM

What a lovely thought, that those bowed heads are in prayer. Great haiku, good luck in the contest :)