June

The best month is June Flowers in the afternoon Birds singing in tune. Date Written:6/8/2022 Note: A Haiku Rhyme 6 Place A HIKU PREMIER Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 1/9/2023 11:29:00 AM

So lovely in its gentleness Paula! Congratulations on your win. Happy New Year. Bundles of blessings to you for 2023!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 1/9/2023 12:44:00 PM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad like my fun write about June. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........

Len Gasun

Date: 12/29/2022 2:54:00 AM

Coming back to read again this beautiful haiku and to express my warmest congratulations on your win my dear friend Paula! Thanks again for sharing! God bless you always and your writings. Hugs. Got sm for you today. Have a blessed day always.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:37:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you came back and like my fun "June" write. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2022 2:28:00 PM

So cute with the rhyming. Big Congrats.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:35:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like my fun write. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/28/2022 10:05:00 AM

Dear Paula, a splendid Hiku! Congratulations for your wonderful win in Brian’s contest. Warmest wishes for a happy new year, my friend.. ~Susan

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 12/29/2022 10:33:00 AM

Thank You, for reading/writing and for your congratulations. Glad you like this "June" Haiku write. A Very Blessed and A Very Healthy New Year 2023...........

Fj Thomas

Date: 6/22/2022 2:13:00 PM

I have never done a rhyming Haiku. This is lovely Paula :)

Fj Thomas
Date: 6/23/2022 9:32:00 AM

I look forward to it!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/23/2022 8:27:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Years ago, I started doing the Haiku Rhymes. I have been told, I was the first writer to do these. I do not know if that is true or not. I love doing them and have written many. Feel free to check out my page for some of them. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............

Ann Foster

Date: 6/20/2022 8:26:00 AM

Love birds... excellent write... Ann

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2022 8:57:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing and your kind words. I also love birds. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/20/2022 12:49:00 AM

Ah, yes, I can see it now! A gorgeous day!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/20/2022 8:55:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you can see it now. June a pretty/fun month. Have a great/blessed day writing away.............

Bill Baker

Date: 6/18/2022 2:46:00 PM

An enjoyable Haiku for a spring day, Paula. Thanks for sharing! Bill

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/19/2022 11:40:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this pretty June haiku write. June is a fun month. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 6/17/2022 7:41:00 AM

Nice haiku Paula...Delice

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/17/2022 8:02:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my June haiku write. June is a wonderful month. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Len Gasun

Date: 6/14/2022 1:44:00 AM

June is truly a lovely month. Great haiku about one of the best months of the year! Thanks a lot for sharing. Have a great day my friend. God bless you always. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/14/2022 8:46:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like my write. Oh yes, June is a great month. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Valsa George

Date: 6/11/2022 8:29:00 PM

Well done, dear friend ! Here June is the time of Monsoon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/12/2022 1:38:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this one. It is also filled with heat. Come on rain, we need you. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/9/2022 8:10:00 AM

A nice month for many things, weddings included ;)

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2022 11:56:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. June is a pretty, fun and busy month. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/9/2022 6:46:00 AM

Nicely dome, Paule Panagiota

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2022 11:32:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this rhyme Haiku write. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2022 4:40:00 PM

so cute. I love to rhyme haikus.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2022 11:31:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Glad you like this cute write. Oh yes, I love to rhyme my Haiku writes. Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/8/2022 2:07:00 PM

June does indeed bring joy. My granddaughter is free from school and is so happy to become a fifth grader. Your haiku expresses that joy. This should do well in the contest Paula. Blessings xxoo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/9/2022 11:29:00 AM

Thanks for reading/writing. Yes, June does bring joy, flowers, birds and out of school. Hooray!!! Have a great/blessed day writing away...............

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/8/2022 12:36:00 PM

This time of year is beautiful, tender and romantic, all at the same time. I enjoy feeling the sunshine on my skin, hearing the birds sing their precious melody. Standing under a magical moon in June. Your thoughts bring a smile, Paula. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy

Brandy Nicole
Date: 6/8/2022 5:23:00 PM

I did catch your smile along the wind. Thank you, Paula. :) Hugs, Brandy

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/8/2022 1:07:00 PM

Thanks for reading/writing. It was so nice to see you here. Glad I gave you a smile. I love to give out smiles. Here is another smile. Did you catch it??? Have a great/blessed day writing away...............