junco


blithe is the songbird
chiming on velvet gold plumes
melody fills spring

june wind props avian flight...
leaving me sad notes, goodbye

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Linda Alice Fowler

July 1, 2025 at 7:20 AM

Congratulations Nette! :)

Len Gasun

June 27, 2025 at 11:29 PM

A breathtaking word-painting my dearest poet friend and sis, Nette! I forever adore your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for another well-deserved top win!Hugs and cheers!

Ink Empress

June 26, 2025 at 5:39 AM

Beautiful and unique wordplay here, creatively done! Love the last line the most and also "chiming on velvet gold plumes melody fills spring" stunning presentation. Congratulations on your win: pleasure reading! Sending you light

Kim Rodrigues

June 25, 2025 at 10:30 AM

Congrats!

Jaymee Thomas

June 25, 2025 at 4:14 AM

This is such a poignant little meditation. I love the way blithe slides off my tongue right from the start, like the bird taking flight. Really smart language choices that make the piece sing (pun intended). Congratulations :)