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Andrea Dietrich's High Fives For June Contest...11 June 25
blithe is the songbird chiming on velvet gold plumes melody fills spring june wind props avian flight... leaving me sad notes, goodbye

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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 7/1/2025 7:20:00 AM
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Congratulations Nette! :)
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Len Gasun
Date: 6/27/2025 11:29:00 PM
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A breathtaking word-painting my dearest poet friend and sis, Nette! I forever adore your poetry. Thanks for sharing. Congratulations for another well-deserved top win!Hugs and cheers!
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Ink Empress
Date: 6/26/2025 5:39:00 AM
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Beautiful and unique wordplay here, creatively done! Love the last line the most and also "chiming on velvet gold plumes melody fills spring" stunning presentation. Congratulations on your win: pleasure reading! Sending you light
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/25/2025 10:30:00 AM
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Congrats!
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Jaymee Thomas
Date: 6/25/2025 4:14:00 AM
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This is such a poignant little meditation. I love the way blithe slides off my tongue right from the start, like the bird taking flight. Really smart language choices that make the piece sing (pun intended). Congratulations :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 6/24/2025 1:36:00 PM
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Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful "junco" write. Have a blessed day with your win................
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/24/2025 1:07:00 PM
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This is so pretty and melodic, Nette. GREAT job and congrats in my contest.
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Sara Baker
Date: 6/17/2025 4:09:00 PM
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such beautiful words, delicately written. I especially like the last two lines, yellow rose
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/13/2025 3:54:00 PM
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goodbye au viedersein, farewell... Perhaps the song will linger... tho that is plaintive too I guess. ~ Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 6/12/2025 4:59:00 PM
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Love those opening lines, so pretty!
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Paige Hind
Date: 6/11/2025 7:00:00 PM
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Very beautiful, leaves me with "sad notes of goodbye"- sweet imagery
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