Jumping to Conclusions

      My trust was shattered
   when I saw you out last night
  hugging that lovely young girl.


	Forgive me, my sweet,
      for failing to disclose this:
     My younger sister’s in town.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
March 9, 2024 at 1:41 PM
Oh wow. This is really clever!
Canerdy Avatar
March 10, 2024 at 12:08 PM
Thanks SO much, Andrea. This means a lot, coming from you! Janice
Rodgers Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 11:44 AM
Hello Janice, I loved your poem and yes it has a nice twist at the end. The mind goes right to the negative. Great Poem!. - Blessings, Daniel
Canerdy Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 9:21 PM
Thanks so much, Daniel. Janice
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