Jumping to Conclusions

      My trust was shattered
   when I saw you out last night
  hugging that lovely young girl.


	Forgive me, my sweet,
      for failing to disclose this:
     My younger sister’s in town.



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Date: 3/9/2024 1:41:00 PM
Oh wow. This is really clever!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/10/2024 12:08:00 PM
Thanks SO much, Andrea. This means a lot, coming from you! Janice
Date: 3/4/2024 11:44:00 AM
Hello Janice, I loved your poem and yes it has a nice twist at the end. The mind goes right to the negative. Great Poem!. - Blessings, Daniel
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 3/4/2024 9:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, Daniel. Janice
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