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If you jump in you'll sink or swim, Loose or win, I'll jump then. You'll know when your fears are faced, Within your chest, your heart will race. To climb to the top you'll reach up high, Forget the rest to touch the sky. To stand on top, alone you'll stand, Walking a road that once was ran. You follow a restricted, off-limit path, Surely caught, you'll face the wrath. Jump on in or run for your life, One day you will face that scythe. Turn away, you surely won't win, Take a chance, you'll sink or swim.

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Date: 5/16/2019 3:00:00 PM
Nice one Briauna, nicely penned! Always good to read some positivity to stir us on.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/16/2019 3:53:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/15/2019 12:34:00 AM
Jump on in or run for your life/// exactly written
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/15/2019 12:37:00 AM
Hope you enjoyed it
Date: 5/7/2019 6:36:00 AM
Strong message, Briauna. Well done.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/7/2019 3:18:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 5/4/2019 8:46:00 AM
Since you commented on one of mine I thought I'd take a look see. I wasn't disappointed Briauna. Just your one line about walking a path that has always been run as well worth the read. I just read some of the comments on this poem; so it seems you are new here. Same as well. I just started posting in February. I look forward to read some of your others.
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/4/2019 4:26:00 PM
I greatly appreciate the time you took and your praise of this poem! I hope you enjoy PS as much as I do!
Date: 5/4/2019 8:14:00 AM
If you don't jump in you will never know if you can make it. Your writing is very compelling, Briauna, I am enjoying it this morning. Welcome to PS. John
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Briauna Brown
Date: 5/4/2019 4:25:00 PM
Glad you liked my work! I'm was here once before but and excited to be back!

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