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Jumbleful Spring

Oh wonderful jumbleful spring hormones awakening after winter naps making bumbling idiots out of unsuspecting saps Oh dopey me, I bathed perfumed, powdered and dusted picked out slinky sexy things getting more and more flust’ed I skipped down the lights and locked the stairs let down the dogs and tripped over my hair “Dames Javid” I purred “come sugar me some lip” as I swiveled my eyelashes and batted my hip He tongued on his trip, as he blew in my eye then gazed in my ear and heaved a big sigh Ah, Springtime, it’s jumbleful don’t you agree? Cause pobody’s nerfect, especially me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/17/2009 4:02:00 AM
This is so different. I want to read more poems with this unique playfulness. It's a great write. Jumbleful so perfect in springtime... makes me think of a Bumbleful Bee. Thank you for your congratulations and comments on my poem. Tamra
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Date: 4/7/2009 9:03:00 AM
Still one of my favorites! Wanting to let you know how much I appreciate you stopping by to comment on my new poems. (And one old one.) Was funny; I did the summer ones for John Hecks contest and started writing all over this huge envelope. When I was finished writing ideas, I had two poems. Now which one to enter. Sigh .... Thank you Trudy Love, Mom
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Date: 3/31/2009 2:26:00 PM
I think you must be just as cute as your poem. Love, daver
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Date: 3/17/2009 5:15:00 PM
Awesome, funny and creative write, Trudy! A very lighthearted and enjoyable read! Thank you for sharing this and your thoughtful comment! Love, Robin
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Date: 3/1/2009 10:44:00 AM
Trudy, I agree with Stacey's comments 100%! I never enjoyed jumbled words more! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 2/25/2009 10:24:00 PM
Trudy, Trudy, Trudy you know when you penned this poem you come pretty close to perfect - Things is your a little on the other side of perfect looking back at us with a smile - Outstanding poetry that was just so light and uplifting it was a blessing written - Thank you for sharing this poem I loved it - You are a gift - I hope all is well - God Bless you guys Trudy - YF4L, MJ
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