Connie Gildersleeve Poet Free verse

Jumbled Puzzle Pieces

Life,
the greatest challenge,
like a puzzle,
you need to find
all the jumbled
fragmented pieces;
the vivid colored images,
even the blacks and whites.
Joined together
you may understand
the meaning 
of your life.

Many of my pieces 
have yet to be joined -
an endless puzzle, I think.

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Donna Jones March 9, 2013 at 4:18 PM Nice job Connie..good luck if for the contest Connie Gildersleeve March 10, 2013 at 7:57 AM Thanks Donna for stopping by and for your comment. Warm Smiles, Connie

Ilene Bauer March 9, 2013 at 1:57 PM nice comparison - i like this! Connie Gildersleeve March 9, 2013 at 2:03 PM Thank you Ilene. The puzzle is endless, few pieces are yet to be joined. Warm Smiles, Connie

Debra Squyres March 9, 2013 at 9:36 AM And then their is always that one missing piece... Enjoyed and quite clever !! Connie Gildersleeve March 9, 2013 at 2:17 PM Oh yes, I'm still looking high and low for a few of my missing life's puzzle pieces. Thanks for stopping my and commenting. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey March 9, 2013 at 8:29 AM I still have yet to find all my pieces of life not to mention put them together! This is an incredible write my friend! You have delighted me with this fun poem Connie! What a challenging thing to do, to put together your respective puzzle of life, Great Work!! Connie Gildersleeve March 9, 2013 at 2:20 PM Yes, I know what you mean. I'm still looking for my missing life's puzzle pieces. I think it's an endless puzzle my fried. Thank you for stopping by and for your comment. Warm Smiles Always, Connie

Eileen Manassian March 9, 2013 at 8:15 AM Profound and deep! A wonderful write, Connie! There is a Master Designer! We just need to follow the plan. I enjoyed this! Connie Gildersleeve March 9, 2013 at 2:21 PM Thanks Eileen for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie