Jumbled

JUMBLED


          Pointless thoughts not implemented
                   appear off and on in strain
                   disturbing idle brain
              in hazard haphazard manner.
                     Sometimes to lament,
                     sometimes to repent,
                     sometimes to ignite anger,
                    reflexing complexity of perplexed mind.  

           All those scattered suffused thoughts
              sprouting from failure, shock or betrayal
                 get crumpled, corrupt, not assembled
                    entangled, coiled turning surreal,
                    fumbling voice of confused heart.
                
            Puzzled bewildered mind ponders to ruminate
               unfulfilled ambitions grumbling in vain.
                     wishing to let those release!
                          Trying to be relieved from nonsenses.

        Peculiar unthinkable happenstances
                                  coming with dreams
                                    in streams
                          under chaotic commotion. 
                     All just juxtaposed drifting 
                        on junk clearance through nightmare.
                                  May be Freudian slip
                            of unintentional subconscious mind
                             through  suffocated smothered feelings.
                             All fuels are .exhausted struggling throughout  life.
                               In the last phase no need to re arrange !
                               Even achievements and success in jumble going to junk.


    03/04/2023l

  Writing Challenge - " J" Forms
                                          Third Place
Contest by Constance La France
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Anisha, wonderful writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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March 9, 2023 at 10:26 AM
- Congratulations on your win ... very well written, Anisha :) - hugs
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