Aditi Mishra Poet Pantoum

July Swing

My naive heartbeats echo an old song,
Last summer was a blissful page of glee,
The July swing has waited for so long,
I smile, for a joyous trip waits for me.

Last summer was a blissful page of glee,
I flew with the wind, the velvet caress,
I smile, for a joyous trip waits for me,
Oh! Wisps of violet adorned my dress.

I flew with the wind, the velvet caress,
Breezy aroma on my pink cheek, kissed,
Oh! Wisps of violet adorned my dress,
Flowers dancing to melody of mist.

Breezy aroma on my pink cheek, kissed,
The July swing has waited for so long,
Flowers dancing to melody of mist,
My naive heartbeats echo an old song.

June 16, 2020

feelings of nostalgia Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Eve Roper
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10 syllables per line checked on howmanysyllables.com/
Rhymes checked with rhymezone.com

~Winner: 1st Place

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Jan Allison July 27, 2020 at 3:00 AM a beautiful pantoum Aditi i adore the line flowers dancing to melody of mist, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x

Eve Roper July 19, 2020 at 11:12 AM Aditi, it is funny how sometimes we grow out of the things we enjoyed when we were young. I still have the privilege of taking my grandson to the park, put him on my lap and swing with him since he is to small. Just the enjoyment of hearing his laugh softens my heart. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Paula Goldsmith July 18, 2020 at 11:57 AM Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" a wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day..........

John Watt July 18, 2020 at 11:37 AM Aditi, congratulations on your top win for your trip of nostalgia. "Flowers dancing to melody of mist" was my favorite line. Blessings to you today ~ John

V. Deepa June 20, 2020 at 4:21 PM Flow of thoughts are nostalgic. Beautifully penned mam.:-) Loved ~Breezy aroma on my pink cheek, kissed. Amazing lines.Keep writing.Good luck for the Contest. Take care.Much love.~Deepa:-) Aditi Mishra June 22, 2020 at 9:03 AM So glad you loved my words Deepa. It is always a pleasure to receive kind appreciation from you. Thank you for your wishes. God bless you. Much love :)

Gordon Mcconnell June 19, 2020 at 3:15 PM Great write Aditi full of great imagery and fine expression. Blessings, Gordon Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 12:06 PM Thank you for your visit and kind words of appreciation Gordon. It really means a lot to me. :)

Joanna Daniel June 19, 2020 at 9:36 AM I too did one on the same topic, Aditi, and yours is really cool:) Aditi Mishra June 20, 2020 at 12:06 PM Glad you love it Jo. Thank you for appreciating. I will read yours and I am sure it is amazing :)

David Mohn June 17, 2020 at 10:07 PM Quite beautiful Aditi :) Aditi Mishra June 18, 2020 at 12:26 PM Thank you so much David :)

Joseph May June 17, 2020 at 9:56 AM "Flowers dancing to melody of mist", Beautifully penned Aditi Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 12:32 PM Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Joseph :)

John Watt June 16, 2020 at 7:28 PM You chose just the right words and vibe for a nostalgic, joyful trip of memories. I wish you all the best in the contest, my friend ~ John Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 3:50 AM I am glad you loved my muse dear friend :) I am growing habitual to reading your words of appreciation and await your responses. You have been such a kind inspiration to me. God bless you. Have a great day :)

Connie Marcum Wong June 16, 2020 at 10:03 AM So lovely and joyful Aditi. Well done! xxoo Aditi Mishra June 17, 2020 at 3:49 AM Glad you love it Connie. Thank you so much for your appreciation. Blessings and love :)