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July Swing

My naive heartbeats echo an old song, Last summer was a blissful page of glee, The July swing has waited for so long, I smile, for a joyous trip waits for me. Last summer was a blissful page of glee, I flew with the wind, the velvet caress, I smile, for a joyous trip waits for me, Oh! Wisps of violet adorned my dress. I flew with the wind, the velvet caress, Breezy aroma on my pink cheek, kissed, Oh! Wisps of violet adorned my dress, Flowers dancing to melody of mist. Breezy aroma on my pink cheek, kissed, The July swing has waited for so long, Flowers dancing to melody of mist, My naive heartbeats echo an old song.
June 16, 2020 feelings of nostalgia Poetry Contest Sponsor: Eve Roper Image #1 10 syllables per line checked on howmanysyllables.com/ Rhymes checked with rhymezone.com ~Winner: 1st Place

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Date: 7/27/2020 3:00:00 AM
a beautiful pantoum Aditi i adore the line flowers dancing to melody of mist, many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
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Date: 7/19/2020 11:12:00 AM
Aditi, it is funny how sometimes we grow out of the things we enjoyed when we were young. I still have the privilege of taking my grandson to the park, put him on my lap and swing with him since he is to small. Just the enjoyment of hearing his laugh softens my heart. Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/18/2020 11:57:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" a wonderful write. Enjoy your win and day..........
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Date: 7/18/2020 11:37:00 AM
Aditi, congratulations on your top win for your trip of nostalgia. "Flowers dancing to melody of mist" was my favorite line. Blessings to you today ~ John
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Date: 6/20/2020 4:21:00 PM
Flow of thoughts are nostalgic. Beautifully penned mam.:-) Loved ~Breezy aroma on my pink cheek, kissed. Amazing lines.Keep writing.Good luck for the Contest. Take care.Much love.~Deepa:-)
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Date: 6/22/2020 9:03:00 AM
So glad you loved my words Deepa. It is always a pleasure to receive kind appreciation from you. Thank you for your wishes. God bless you. Much love :)
Date: 6/19/2020 3:15:00 PM
Great write Aditi full of great imagery and fine expression. Blessings, Gordon
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Date: 6/20/2020 12:06:00 PM
Thank you for your visit and kind words of appreciation Gordon. It really means a lot to me. :)
Date: 6/19/2020 9:36:00 AM
I too did one on the same topic, Aditi, and yours is really cool:)
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Date: 6/20/2020 12:06:00 PM
Glad you love it Jo. Thank you for appreciating. I will read yours and I am sure it is amazing :)
Date: 6/17/2020 10:07:00 PM
Quite beautiful Aditi :)
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Date: 6/18/2020 12:26:00 PM
Thank you so much David :)
Date: 6/17/2020 9:56:00 AM
"Flowers dancing to melody of mist", Beautifully penned Aditi
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Date: 6/17/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words of appreciation Joseph :)
Date: 6/16/2020 7:28:00 PM
You chose just the right words and vibe for a nostalgic, joyful trip of memories. I wish you all the best in the contest, my friend ~ John
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Date: 6/17/2020 3:50:00 AM
I am glad you loved my muse dear friend :) I am growing habitual to reading your words of appreciation and await your responses. You have been such a kind inspiration to me. God bless you. Have a great day :)
Date: 6/16/2020 10:03:00 AM
So lovely and joyful Aditi. Well done! xxoo
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Date: 6/17/2020 3:49:00 AM
Glad you love it Connie. Thank you so much for your appreciation. Blessings and love :)

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