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July 11, 2023     11.25pm

Hot summer sun takes turn with heavy rain, Bringing two seasons on this month’s funny phase; Each event always takes place, despite sultry atmosphere's craze. Big surprises come this seventh month- Fourth and breathtaking halo of the sun.

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Date: 8/1/2023 6:23:00 PM
Dear Len, you capture the spirit of July with beautiful summertime imagery. I especially enjoyed "Hot / summer /sun takes turn / with heavy rain" - wow! Simply splendid, my dear poet friend! A lovely etheree. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/25/2023 9:41:00 PM
Belated thanks for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Susan. Sorry for coming so late because i was so busy with the given load of work in school. Again, thank you thank you sooo much. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 8/1/2023 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner in the contest. Way to go. Sara
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/25/2023 9:35:00 PM
Belated thank you for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sara. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 7/28/2023 5:35:00 PM
An enjoyable etheree, Len! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/25/2023 9:34:00 PM
Belated thank you for reading my poem, your uplifting comment and your congratulatory comments my dear poet friend Kim. may God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 7/28/2023 11:10:00 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. I'm interested in understanding the meaning of the last line. And is this monsoon time for you? Congrats for your win.
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Len Gasun
Date: 8/25/2023 9:33:00 PM
Belated thank you for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Andrea. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 7/12/2023 1:35:00 AM
I thought you were gone. Loved your poem.
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/22/2023 6:10:00 AM
Oh, I'm just like a mushroom that appears and disappears my dear poet friends especially this month because we are always busy at school. Sorry for the late reply. I'll be visiting you so soon oki. Thanks for reading and loving this simple poem. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Date: 7/11/2023 4:55:00 PM
Interesting Etheree poem, Len. Well written with good infomation and imagery of July. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
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Len Gasun
Date: 7/22/2023 6:08:00 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet friend Bill. Thanks again so much. God bless you always my dear poet friend and your writings.

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