Notes About The Poem

July 11, 2023     11.25pm

July Surprises

Hot
summer 
sun takes turn
with heavy rain,
Bringing two seasons
on this month’s funny phase;
Each event always takes place,
despite sultry atmosphere's craze.
Big surprises come this seventh month-
Fourth and breathtaking halo of the sun.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Ashley Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 6:23 PM
Dear Len, you capture the spirit of July with beautiful summertime imagery. I especially enjoyed "Hot / summer /sun takes turn / with heavy rain" - wow! Simply splendid, my dear poet friend! A lovely etheree. Congratulations for your wonderful win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 9:41 PM
Belated thanks for reading my poem, your uplifting comments and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Susan. Sorry for coming so late because i was so busy with the given load of work in school. Again, thank you thank you sooo much. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Kendrick Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 1:39 PM
Congratulations on this winner in the contest. Way to go. Sara
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 9:35 PM
Belated thank you for reading my poem and your congratulatory greetings my dear poet friend Sara. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Merryman Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 5:35 PM
An enjoyable etheree, Len! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 9:34 PM
Belated thank you for reading my poem, your uplifting comment and your congratulatory comments my dear poet friend Kim. may God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Dietrich Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 11:10 AM
Thanks for entering my contest. I'm interested in understanding the meaning of the last line. And is this monsoon time for you? Congrats for your win.
Gasun Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 9:33 PM
Belated thank you for acknowledging my poem in your contest my dear poet friend Andrea. Your approval through my win means a lot to me. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Buhagiar Avatar
July 12, 2023 at 1:35 AM
I thought you were gone. Loved your poem.
Gasun Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:10 AM
Oh, I'm just like a mushroom that appears and disappears my dear poet friends especially this month because we are always busy at school. Sorry for the late reply. I'll be visiting you so soon oki. Thanks for reading and loving this simple poem. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs
Baker Avatar
July 11, 2023 at 4:55 PM
Interesting Etheree poem, Len. Well written with good infomation and imagery of July. Have a pleasant day, my friend. Bill
Gasun Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 6:08 AM
Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting comments my dear poet friend Bill. Thanks again so much. God bless you always my dear poet friend and your writings.
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