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This realm is where I shall always belong. God bless this nation and upkeeps it strong. For he will thrust his sword and suit his vow. He wielded his hand to ensure bestow. July 4th, our land is vastly stunning We unleash acute bursts and stark burning. Our coastlines and towns' awe and wonder. For our advocate chart and plush stunner. The sky is a gored purplish mantle hue. Moon gazers will revere this jewel view. Eyelid star for each candle in the sky. Wanting to claim the grass with their glazed eye. Sublimity entwined with prettiness Hands and hearts clasped at once in happiness. Throbbing footsteps pulverized out the wave. Of the flawless world and the spirit crave.
2nd place Contest Winner Written: July 07, 2022 Christmas in July or July Celebration Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Checked by HMS.COM / 10 syllables per line

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Date: 8/12/2022 2:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Your "July Glory And Beauty" is a lovely write. July 4th and the eagle just seems to go together. A big and beautiful bird. Have a blessed day/weekend..........
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Date: 8/11/2022 9:50:00 AM
Fourth of July and the flight of the eagle -truly images of this nation's quest in this great experiment Lasaad! Lovely uplifting write! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 8/11/2022 6:41:00 AM
Lasaad, congratulations on your winning placement, gorgeous imagery!
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Date: 8/11/2022 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet friend on your great win in Tania's Poetry Contest !
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Date: 7/7/2022 9:01:00 PM
July 4th is a day of rejoicing for the Americans ! A nation's Independence day is the most celebrated day when all the citizens of the land hold hands in unity and merriment ! The beautiful July sky decorates itself to be in tandem with the revelry of the people. Let the eagle fly high. Beautiful poem Lasaad !
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Date: 7/7/2022 3:08:00 PM
Hello Lassad, the eagle is a beautiful bird. A beautiful sysmble for where you live. Enjoy your evening my friend.
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Date: 7/7/2022 2:53:00 PM
Glorious tribute you convey on the flight of eagle-- honoring America's freedom. Best to you.
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Date: 7/7/2022 1:56:00 PM
a perfectly stunning tribute to our country and the spirit of a nation's people to uphold its honor. Good luck in the contest! :)Paulette
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