Julie

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Julie

I exist

I exist
Only in my sadness
I exist
Only in my nightmares
I exist
Only in a painting

She paints the faces
Of those who have no face
She paints the dreams
Of those who held no hope
She paints
As I die inside my poems

Ink and paint both dry
We are small dots
On the map of gods canvass
No tear shall change
All the dancing graves
6





Julie D'Aubigny

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Casarah Nance

Date: 9/22/2016 6:07:00 AM

what a piece of art... hugs

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/13/2016 8:46:00 AM

I'll give you a 7. I think the other Judges are trying to prevent you from medaling! The competition is fixed! This is an outrage. Let's go back to the instant replay. Notice how Jan and Tim are whispering to each other.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/12/2016 2:47:00 AM

The picture is quite mesmerising Arthur - who is the artist? great poem too - I rate it 6 like you do lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/13/2016 12:06:00 AM

Well I am not sure, oh I know lets ask Ruby where I stole this one, he seems to be in the know!! haha haha haha ( seeker did I spell all those haha's right? )

Tim Smith

Date: 9/11/2016 10:23:00 PM

The painting is beautiful. I could get lost in it. A great poem to go along with it. 6

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/13/2016 12:08:00 AM

I have no idea how but I just gave myself an 18! Azul!!!!

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/13/2016 12:05:00 AM

Thanks Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2016 1:11:00 PM

they would give it a 'nein' Tim lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 9/12/2016 11:35:00 AM

I have no control over the East German judge.

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/11/2016 10:56:00 PM

So did you give me a 6? LOL

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/11/2016 10:38:00 PM

So did you give me a 6? LOL

Arthur Vaso
Date: 9/11/2016 10:30:00 PM

So did you give me a 6? LOL