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Judgmental People and Haters

I can no longer hold my tongue
 
I’ve got my knockers and my mockers
Oh, and I can’t forget the blockers
 
So you badmouth me on FB behind my back
Let rip with your vitriol and go on the attack
 
With your false humility and humble claims
You are chock full of bull crap, playing games
 
Well…
 
I’m telling you this
Stop taking the piss
 
Here is my butt. I'd be remiss
if I didn't offer it for you to kiss
 
Go ahead skunk; make my day 
release your stinking spray!
Oh, there's just one thing I have to say...
I don’t do 'two-faced book' anyway!

Judgmental people and haters contest
sponsored by Brenda Chiri 

A note to whoever is being so nasty to Robert  … you must be jealous of his talent for writing poetry and you should be ashamed of your behaviour!

08-11-17

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CayCay Godwin December 13, 2017 at 12:34 AM Nobody can let it rhyme rip like you can when genuine ruffles ink your pen. (ruffles sounds much nicer than anger, pissed, etc.) I enjoyed this so much, the boom, boom slam of it - such solid delivery and feel. Congrats, too! Picturing you perfect ... CayCay Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:57 PM Believe me CayCay it takes a lot to ruffle my feathers and it was so lovely to go out of my comfort zone and get away from humour but cyber bullying is despicable and i had to write to support Robert:-) hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart December 12, 2017 at 12:14 PM Ha! This is awesome! Delight! Congratulations Lovely :) xomo! Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:56 PM Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan x

Edward Mccall December 12, 2017 at 11:33 AM WIN!!!!! Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:55 PM :-) xx

Edward Mccall December 12, 2017 at 11:32 AM Congrats on a fabulous Jan definitely well deserved. Hugs Edward. :-) Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:55 PM Thanks Edward:-) hugs Jan x

Subimal Sinha-Roy December 12, 2017 at 12:20 AM Congrats on your great win, Jan. Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:54 PM Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan x

Eve Roper December 11, 2017 at 7:55 PM Back to congratulate you on an awesome win :) Hugs eve ~`* Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:54 PM Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan x

Winged Warrior December 11, 2017 at 4:20 PM Poet on fire here!!!...Jan if you're willing to expose your rump, so this low-class chump may kiss it...well I commend you, my friend, lol...way to go girl...Robert will be serving rump roast for you lol...Congrats!!! on 1'st place for a first-class lady...^WW^ Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:54 PM I hope whoever did the bullying is absolutely ashamed by their despicable behaviour:-( hugs jan xx Winged Warrior December 11, 2017 at 4:35 PM Robert is a sincere, honest, beautiful and very talented poet...he does not deserve any form of mockery...the individual(s) that are doing this are taking advantage of Roberts integrity...god bless...^WW^

John Lawless December 11, 2017 at 3:19 PM WHEW! THAT IS ONE HELLUVA FUR BALL OF PROTEST.....RAVE ON, MCJAN, RAVE ON......congrats on the top spot. Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:53 PM A little different to my usual style John!:-) hugs jan xx

Robert Lindley December 11, 2017 at 2:31 PM Congratulations on your win in Brenda's contest my friend! I was in awe of how much anger and wrath you displayed in verse. Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:52 PM I have no idea by who how or why you were bullied Robert but i am absolutely disgusted someone could sink so low. i was so glad to be able to support you:-) hugs jan xx

Janice Canerdy December 11, 2017 at 1:59 PM WOW! Tell it like it is, Jan. CONGRATS!! Janice Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:49 PM Thanks Janice:-) hugs Jan x

Jean Murray December 11, 2017 at 1:37 PM Well done Jan! Sock it to 'em!! Congratulations on top place. Jan Allison December 15, 2017 at 4:47 PM Thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan x

Melissa Tracy November 16, 2017 at 8:28 AM Love this! Cyber bullying is awful! Love your choice of words so creative and fun to read even though it's such a sad topic that brings toxicness to the world. Beautifully expressed! Jan Allison November 16, 2017 at 8:50 AM Thanks Melissa I also wrote a poem called 'being bullied' which is very sad and unfortunately is based on a true story:-( hugs jan xx

Christopher Flaherty November 14, 2017 at 4:48 PM You tell them Jan Taking the piss love it Its very sad someone being nasty to someone else if they take it to heart but at the same time Jan don't you find it laughable and an inverted compliment in a way. Don't pity them outwit and engage them Christopher Flaherty November 14, 2017 at 5:48 PM Wouldn't give them a second thought Just write and post even more to annoy them Its probably the only thing they have written anyone will ever read Jan Allison November 14, 2017 at 5:22 PM Thanks for dropping by Christopher:-) Makes me so glad I don't do 2faced book and I wrote this slam poem to support Robert and Brenda with the contest. I have my mockers and my blockers but hey ho its up to them and a shame they don't have anything else to occupy their sad little lives:-( hugs Jan xx

Maurice Rigoler November 11, 2017 at 6:54 AM Jan, bravo to your response to the jerk who (or coward) who wrote about Robert. Poetrysoup management should remove him from posting anything. So far I haven't been targeted by the likes of him. Many thanks for your support, dear friend. / M Jan Allison November 11, 2017 at 6:57 AM I'm not sure where Robert was targeted but whoever is responsible should be thoroughly ashamed - my poem is just a general rant about social media but I'm told I've been gossiped about shame they don't have better things to do with their time:-( hugs jan xx

Mick Talbot November 11, 2017 at 3:09 AM Oh, have I overstepped the mark with my previous, I hope not? Hugs....Mick Jan Allison November 11, 2017 at 6:39 AM Not at all Mick:-) the poem was written purely for the contest but I am told I'm the subject of some crap on 2facedbook so I based it on that - its a shame folk don't have better things to do with their time and i don't do 2facedbok anyway lol. I'm so sad atseeing what was the reason the contest was put up in the first place, i don't know who is targeting Robert how or where but they should be ashamed :-( hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian November 9, 2017 at 5:33 PM Jan...I'm so out of the loop. What is going on and why? It upsets me so. Robert is a sweet soul. Why can't we all get along? I didn't know about this spilling over into Facebook. Boy...where have I been? If you are in touch with Robert, please give him a big hug from me, sweetie, ok? Your poem is a scathing rebuke. Jan Allison November 9, 2017 at 5:39 PM The poem is purely for the contest Eileen - I have no idea who is bullying him or how Robert is being targeted but I understand I have been a topic of crap on 2faced book and I really don't give a toss what people think or say about me ... I've had issues on soup in the past but there is one thing for sure .. I'm here to stay and if folks don't like my poems they don't have to read them:-) hugs Jan xx

DM Babbit November 9, 2017 at 9:17 AM The world seems to have become so negative of late. Good write Jan, keep us all honest and open, away from the hate and sharpness of bullying. Jan Allison November 9, 2017 at 12:23 PM I'm so sorry is experiencing negativity it is horrible to be bullied:-( if it's happening on soup mail I hope he let's soup know and they can deal with it...I've seen too many .lovely people leave as a result of nastiness on here:-(:-( hugs Jan

Arthur Vaso November 8, 2017 at 10:00 PM Very well said, and Robert if you reading this, you know your poetry shines!! :) Jan Allison November 9, 2017 at 4:11 AM You are so right Arthur, the only reason I can think someone would be nasty to Robert is through jealous:-( hugs jan xx

Paul Callus November 8, 2017 at 2:52 PM This is powerfully expressive, Jan!! One can feel that it was written with heartfelt emotion and conviction. The end note is worrying....why would anybody want to be nasty to Robert, of all people!!! I admire his writing and his honesty, and have always had words of encouragement from him. Hugs // paul Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 3:37 PM I was incensed to think someone could bully Robert to the extent he wants to leave soup - but then again the same thing happened to me in my early days at soup when my style was criticised but I am not going to let some bully stop me from doing something i love and I will never be hounded away from the site. he is an exceptional writer and I've learned so much from reading his poems and he needs support through the contest to know he is a valued and loved member of soup and needs to stay:-) hugs Jan xx

Lim'Rik Flats November 8, 2017 at 2:37 PM You go girl! Don't know the particulars but think you've expressed it well. Hugs and antacids ~ j Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 3:23 PM I don't know the particulars but Brenda is doing her contest in support of Robert and I had to write too:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France November 8, 2017 at 2:32 PM Jan, wow you were angry when you wrote this, who could ever bully Robert, what is wrong with people. Send me this person's name by email because I need to block them. Oh and good luck in the contest too! Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 3:22 PM Noooo Constance I was just upset for Robert - the first line i came up with was the skunk one which is a play on words of the Clint Eastwood line and I found it was really funny! I am saddened anyone would stoop so low as to bully Robert, they must be jealous of his talent:-( hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey November 8, 2017 at 1:57 PM This write is to be praised as a very significant honor to Robert! I really loved reading this incredibly magnificent write to all those haters out there...watch out...Jan is here and she just dissed you, HA! All right Jan! Way to write a great poem and tell them off! I loved it! Awesome Work my friend, I'm glad you did this! Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 3:20 PM LOL Russell I hope Robert gets comfort from the support he is getting through Brenda's contest and he doesn't let the bullies win:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper November 8, 2017 at 1:43 PM Wow, Jan, I can also say Bravo with this brilliant write.. I didn't know about Robert, whoever is doing it it is just jealous.. it needs to stop.. This is a brilliant write a winner already .Huge Eve ~`* Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 3:19 PM Thanks Eve I have no idea who would stoop so low as to bully Robert to the extent he wants to leave. i know I've been the targeted on 2facedbook but i don't give a toss its a shame they have so little to occupy themselves. I hope Robert sees the support he is getting and doesn't let the bullies win:-( hugs jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2017 at 12:41 PM - BRAVO, JAN !!!! - ... "the beast" with a new name ... always on the wings with bad comment ... if we talk about the same "animal" I have blocked it - hugs // Anne-Lise ! Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 12:46 PM The contest is in support of Robert Lindley - I can't understand why anyone would pick on Robert, the only reason i can think of is they are jealous of him and his lovely poetry. I have no one blocked on soup but I know of some who block me as their comments are turned off but then they unblock me to write something nasty - its a petty childish game!:-( hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2017 at 12:42 PM Robert ... who ?

Dale Gregory Cozart November 8, 2017 at 11:54 AM AWESOME, Jan! These people just need to get a life. Anne-Lise Andresen November 8, 2017 at 12:44 PM - True Dale, they must get a life !!! Jan Allison November 8, 2017 at 12:34 PM I am so so saddened to see Robert getting bullied and for Brenda to do a contest in support of him is so kind.:-)The poem is part biographical with a few additions ! hugs jan xx

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