Judgmental eye

Your hesitancy
is observed yet overlooked,
since love in your heart’s not bloomed.

Perhaps it’s a test,
as of our soul agreement,
which we merely here enact?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Anaya Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 11:07 AM
The need for diplomatic boundaries is key to the passive aggressive, if we all follow 5 simple rules, I read. Love is a test of time. Crimes of passion exist and are persistently ubiquitous. I find we are an experimental work in progress...xhugsx
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May 19, 2024 at 9:06 PM
deep musings :)
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