Judgement Overrides Jumbled - Not For Contest

Jumbled means in quite a mess
Just like my mind in distress
Jump says my brain at cliffs edge
Judgement stalls this death I pledge*



*Last line kindly supplied by Tim Smith


Penned 20 March 2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Smith Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 5:59 AM
Lol...It is real good
Roberts Avatar
March 22, 2017 at 3:08 PM
your not biased are you rofl....Seren
Smith Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 9:09 AM
Sure...It came from a few ideas
Roberts Avatar
March 21, 2017 at 8:31 AM
is it ok how I put the comment that you supplied last line
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