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A children's bedtime song I wrote one night while picking around on my guitar.

You can't get to Heaven with the Man In The Moon You can't get to Heaven on a flying spoon You can't get to Heaven on a roller skate You can only get to Heaven through the Pearly Gates You might see the Devil in your daddy's barn You might see the Devil in a ball of yarn You might see the Devil if you stay up late You might see him hanging 'round the Pearly Gates The Angels said "Children don't you run away "We just stopped by to watch you play "So pick up your toys and you can stay "We'll see you again on Judgement Day"

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Date: 12/5/2021 2:57:00 AM
Good job Don! This write up is inspiring. Simple write up with deep meaning and light rhythm. To whoever will read this write up, don't let anyone or anything to distract you from the narrow way that leads to HEAVEN. Good once again Don. ??
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