Judgement

When are you getting married Why are you still there, at home Don't you think its time Time to toddle of you go I hear those whispers, see those stares look at her, she must be filled with such despair look at her, she is all alone Oh dear no, not a life they would call their own Yes i hear you, all of you Yes, i feel your judgements to I see you staring, with pity in your eyes You think you know, you don't know me I am happy, oh yes i am Happiest i have ever been My life, its where it needs to be I am settled now, so happy and so free

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/27/2016 10:53:00 PM

lisa, enjoyed reading your poem, Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. XOX -- LINDA --

Skat A

Date: 9/9/2015 2:33:00 PM

stunning... SKAT

John Posey

Date: 9/8/2014 6:28:00 PM

Well done, my friend.... Your talent is evident.... your work will grow more powerful if you follow 3 rules...... Edit, then edit and then edit...... love your courage...... Jake

Richard Nnoli

Date: 8/31/2014 1:35:00 PM

Wow, Lisa this is beautiful, he that wear the shoe understand's best, in life we make the choice if our life, don't be drive nor move from your stand, take up your motivation and move ahead, nice to meet you, am Richard Nnoli, am from Africa got to know about you from peter duggan ur sweet father, love the way you write, don't stop writing, keep on, Richard

Susan Northwood

Date: 8/25/2014 3:04:00 PM

hi my lovely cuz, just loved this poem, you go girl, let those folk see you happy !!! Hey cuz, did ya get the apple mac ? lol xxx

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/24/2014 12:27:00 AM

You sing out my friend Set the ink to page, it is all the rage A poetess you will soon find speaks freely her own mind! Great write and heart, heart -you got it!!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 8/23/2014 10:57:00 PM

Yes, dear....you know what is best for you. In this part of the world, that is even more of an issue...The expectations can drive some crazy! I'm glad you are happy and content and talented to voice that loud and clear! ;) Great write.

Vera Duggan

Date: 8/23/2014 7:59:00 PM

Lovely write my dear, why haven't we seen this in you before, my clever little chookie, love ya!.............Mum...........

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/23/2014 10:47:00 PM

Thanks my lovely mum and probably because know one ever promised me an Apple Mac Pro before lol x x x x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/23/2014 1:43:00 PM

- The joy and freedom ..... It's like the air ...... you must have it - a very well written poem, Lisa - Happy weekend :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Lisa Duggan
Date: 8/23/2014 10:48:00 PM

Thanks Anne Lise yes that freedom and happiness is lovely :)