Deborah Burch Poet Verse

Jubilee

Jubilee 

Joyful shouts we proclaim!
Jarring cries of freedom's
Jurisdiction by God,
JUMP from every lip
Jailed...in debt...and in slave!
JUBILEE is here! And
Judgement...is forgiven!

3.5.2017©deborah burch 


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Paul Callus March 8, 2017 at 3:57 PM A lovely, joyful poem which reflects your happy character, Deborah! Congratulations on this deserved podium finish. Regards // paul

Agnes Krampe March 8, 2017 at 2:19 PM Congrats on your win, Deborah.

Elizabeth Kinch March 8, 2017 at 2:09 PM I can see why you won with this great write, a joyful jubilee!

Anne-Lise Andresen March 8, 2017 at 2:15 AM - Congratulations on your win, Deborah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Darren White March 7, 2017 at 11:10 PM Congratulations Deb :)

Cheryl Hoffman March 7, 2017 at 8:48 PM Congrats on your fine pleiade poem win in the contest Deborah!~Che :)

Joseph May March 7, 2017 at 8:40 PM Congrats on your win Deb

Kim Rodrigues March 7, 2017 at 8:33 PM Nice, Deborah! Freedom of Jubilee! Congrats!

Janis Medders Tobechi March 7, 2017 at 8:26 PM Congratulations on your win. Well done.

Eve Roper March 7, 2017 at 7:50 PM Very nice, Deborah, congratulations on your win hugs Eve

Laura Leiser March 7, 2017 at 5:57 PM I already love the word, Jubilee! You described the meaning really well in this Pleiades, Deborah! Well done, and congrats :)

Kim Merryman March 7, 2017 at 5:08 PM A "jubilant" write, Deborah! I recognize the concept of Jubilee from the Old Testament. Your words and formatting make your poem joyful. Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim

Judy Ball March 7, 2017 at 1:18 PM Excellent Deb. There is a feeling of release here. A deep feeling of relief. Well done. God Bless and a big 7 from me. JB

Nette Onclaud March 6, 2017 at 8:38 PM pure elation, deb.. i like how you composed this superb pleiades... huggs Deborah Burch March 6, 2017 at 10:14 PM Oh thank you nette! :) you are always so sweet!! Big Hugggs and love you. Deb

David Pekrul March 6, 2017 at 7:54 PM Nice write -- nice message! I like! Deborah Burch March 6, 2017 at 10:14 PM :) thank you David!! Hugggs.

Andrea Dietrich March 6, 2017 at 3:51 PM you did a very commendable job with JULBILEE!! It was one i had been considering doing!! Deborah Burch March 6, 2017 at 10:12 PM :) thank you Andy! But I love your jelly one!! Big Hugggs love you.

James Horn March 5, 2017 at 3:55 PM Beside the birch by a silvery cocoon down on me shown a big, bright moon while singing loudly was a loon. Deborah Burch March 5, 2017 at 4:00 PM Lol! I didn't mean to sing quite so loudly Jack!;) hope it didn't wake your sweet moonlit nap. ; big hugs! Thanks for stopping by. deb