Jubilant Progress of our Special Child

“He’ll progress toward retrogression…” such was neuro-pediatrician's lamentable diagnosis grievous… torturous life sentence! What a woeful condemnation... ...yet marvelous life’s persistence our special child should never miss while enjoying love’s wondrous bliss. Though he is epileptic midst gestures obviously spastic his disposition --- jubilant radiates cheerfully triumphant. With thanksgiving gesture’s delight marking faith of ascending height he shows notable progress-might in conversation endeavor along comprehension fervor revealing wondrous miracles defying doubtful manacles. Now, as a handsome fourteen-year old* lad he praises the Lord Who blesses in his wheel-chair’s trip, daily glad to victory,** he progresses.
*He was born on April 28, 2009 **1Corinthians 15:57 But thanks be to God, which giveth us the victory through our Lord Jesus Christ. January 11, 2020 *Edited on January 11, 2024 7th place, "A fairytale or not, Short story poem" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Fire Bird; judged on 1/22/2024. Original Title: Progress Victorious Honorable Mention, "STRAND no 660,any theme, any form" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Brian Strand; judged on 1/30/2020.
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Alex Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 9:44 PM
A true story of your service-centered life experience with the differently abled children. Beautifully connected with the scriptures as well. Congratulations!
Goldsmith Avatar
January 22, 2024 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a blessed day writing away......................
Scars Avatar
January 30, 2020 at 9:08 AM
wow, amazing sweet Beata, thanks for sharing such a beauty. x:-)
Mcconnell Avatar
January 11, 2020 at 10:31 AM
Such a spiritual grand piece Beata, great imagery and enchanting rhyme. Blessings always, Gordon
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