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Joyful Juice

christening cruise, ship to shore...queasy slick ~
  tropically trotting, tempura-tapping, sure shoot’n quick ~
    digital capture of roiling hammock can’t help courting hacks ~
      HOrrendous cheesy chunks HUlking bits from back ~
         Surely shooting crackers from dry yak, yakkity yUK ~
            Torrential towing, whale-blowing brackish sucks ~
                sleazy sponge sops uncorked sluice ~
                   dawns dreadful dweeb of joyful juice ~

                   ~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1-18-2020 ~~~~~~~~~~



Nina Parmenter’s Tongue Twister contest

Copyright © Kim Rodrigues | Year Posted 2020

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Richard Lamoureux Date: 1/24/2020 9:07:00 AM A fun twister, congrats on your placement. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply

Gary Smith Date: 1/24/2020 3:29:00 AM A right mouthful Kim, great fun, congrats. :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/24/2020 7:40:00 AM Yes but that mouthfuls erupting...lol ;)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 1/23/2020 7:55:00 PM I enjoyed the playful use of many different consonants used for alliterations. Congrats on the winner list, Kim Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2020 7:59:00 PM Thank you, my friend!

Jan Allison Date: 1/23/2020 2:21:00 PM what a super poem Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/23/2020 6:29:00 PM Thank you, Jan!

Beata Agustin Date: 1/22/2020 2:35:00 AM Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this... and your joyful juice. God bless you. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/22/2020 7:59:00 AM Thank you, sweet friend!

Caren Krutsinger Date: 1/21/2020 9:21:00 PM This is wonderful! Great job! Congratulations! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/21/2020 9:23:00 PM Thank you, Caren! I had fun with it.

Paul Callus Date: 1/20/2020 2:26:00 PM I can tell you racked your mind to produce this tongue twister, Kim, and even managed to get it to rhyme. Well done! Regards // paul Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/21/2020 3:11:00 PM Thank you, Paul!

Joe Dimino Date: 1/19/2020 9:59:00 PM Sounds delightful! Your description and style are enchanting. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/19/2020 10:13:00 PM Thank you so much, Joe! :)

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 1/19/2020 4:11:00 PM A delicious tongue twister, Kim. You had fun writing this, didn't you? Enjoyed reading. Best wishes in Nina's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/19/2020 10:13:00 PM Yes I did, Carolyn! Sometimes the ideas flow... Hugs...Kim :)

Sandra Adams Date: 1/19/2020 11:35:00 AM i have yet to be on a cruise, haven't desired to...probably because i'd be the one to get sea sick... good tongue twister Kim... best wishes in the contest... hugs Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/19/2020 2:53:00 PM And this didn’t make you want to go cruising...lol. Thank you, Sandra!

Silent One Date: 1/19/2020 6:02:00 AM Great use of alliteration to create a tongue twister.. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/19/2020 8:03:00 AM Thank you, Silent! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 1/19/2020 5:52:00 AM I was not there but...surely I would have liked to be dearest, Kim! hahaha. Much enjoyed! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/19/2020 8:04:00 AM Thankfully I usually don’t get seasick. Thanks, Demetrios!

Gershon Wolf Date: 1/18/2020 8:04:00 PM Those 'sleazy sponge sops' did me in! Thanks for the fun and the funniness. :) Gershon Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/19/2020 8:04:00 AM LOL...thanks!

Running Wolves Date: 1/18/2020 7:11:00 PM sounds like the morning after a frat party. well done Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/18/2020 7:51:00 PM LOL...thank you!

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 1/18/2020 5:53:00 PM Hello Kim, this sounds good to me. may i have a glass of that juice? have a nice evening my friend. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 1/18/2020 6:27:00 PM LOL! Thanks, Darlene :)