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Joyful Juice

christening cruise, ship to shore...queasy slick ~ tropically trotting, tempura-tapping, sure shoot’n quick ~ digital capture of roiling hammock can’t help courting hacks ~ HOrrendous cheesy chunks HUlking bits from back ~ Surely shooting crackers from dry yak, yakkity yUK ~ Torrential towing, whale-blowing brackish sucks ~ sleazy sponge sops uncorked sluice ~ dawns dreadful dweeb of joyful juice ~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1-18-2020 ~~~~~~~~~~ Nina Parmenter’s Tongue Twister contest

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Date: 1/24/2020 9:07:00 AM
A fun twister, congrats on your placement. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 1/24/2020 3:29:00 AM
A right mouthful Kim, great fun, congrats. :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/24/2020 7:40:00 AM
Yes but that mouthfuls erupting...lol ;)
Date: 1/23/2020 7:55:00 PM
I enjoyed the playful use of many different consonants used for alliterations. Congrats on the winner list, Kim
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2020 7:59:00 PM
Thank you, my friend!
Date: 1/23/2020 2:21:00 PM
what a super poem Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/23/2020 6:29:00 PM
Thank you, Jan!
Date: 1/22/2020 2:35:00 AM
Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this... and your joyful juice. God bless you.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/22/2020 7:59:00 AM
Thank you, sweet friend!
Date: 1/21/2020 9:21:00 PM
This is wonderful! Great job! Congratulations!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2020 9:23:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! I had fun with it.
Date: 1/20/2020 2:26:00 PM
I can tell you racked your mind to produce this tongue twister, Kim, and even managed to get it to rhyme. Well done! Regards // paul
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/21/2020 3:11:00 PM
Thank you, Paul!
Date: 1/19/2020 9:59:00 PM
Sounds delightful! Your description and style are enchanting.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 10:13:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joe! :)
Date: 1/19/2020 4:11:00 PM
A delicious tongue twister, Kim. You had fun writing this, didn't you? Enjoyed reading. Best wishes in Nina's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 10:13:00 PM
Yes I did, Carolyn! Sometimes the ideas flow... Hugs...Kim :)
Date: 1/19/2020 11:35:00 AM
i have yet to be on a cruise, haven't desired to...probably because i'd be the one to get sea sick... good tongue twister Kim... best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 2:53:00 PM
And this didn’t make you want to go cruising...lol. Thank you, Sandra!
Date: 1/19/2020 6:02:00 AM
Great use of alliteration to create a tongue twister..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 8:03:00 AM
Thank you, Silent! :)
Date: 1/19/2020 5:52:00 AM
I was not there but...surely I would have liked to be dearest, Kim! hahaha. Much enjoyed!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thankfully I usually don’t get seasick. Thanks, Demetrios!
Date: 1/18/2020 8:04:00 PM
Those 'sleazy sponge sops' did me in! Thanks for the fun and the funniness. :) Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/19/2020 8:04:00 AM
LOL...thanks!
Date: 1/18/2020 7:11:00 PM
sounds like the morning after a frat party. well done
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 7:51:00 PM
LOL...thank you!
Date: 1/18/2020 5:53:00 PM
Hello Kim, this sounds good to me. may i have a glass of that juice? have a nice evening my friend.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/18/2020 6:27:00 PM
LOL! Thanks, Darlene :)

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