Kim Rodrigues Poet Rhyme

Joyful Juice

christening cruise, ship to shore...queasy slick ~
  tropically trotting, tempura-tapping, sure shoot’n quick ~
    digital capture of roiling hammock can’t help courting hacks ~
      HOrrendous cheesy chunks HUlking bits from back ~
         Surely shooting crackers from dry yak, yakkity yUK ~
            Torrential towing, whale-blowing brackish sucks ~
                sleazy sponge sops uncorked sluice ~
                   dawns dreadful dweeb of joyful juice ~

                   ~~~~~~~~~~~~ 1-18-2020 ~~~~~~~~~~



Nina Parmenter’s Tongue Twister contest

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Richard Lamoureux January 24, 2020 at 9:07 AM A fun twister, congrats on your placement. Hugs Rick.

Gary Smith January 24, 2020 at 3:29 AM A right mouthful Kim, great fun, congrats. :) Kim Rodrigues January 24, 2020 at 7:40 AM Yes but that mouthfuls erupting...lol ;)

Andrea Dietrich January 23, 2020 at 7:55 PM I enjoyed the playful use of many different consonants used for alliterations. Congrats on the winner list, Kim Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 7:59 PM Thank you, my friend!

Jan Allison January 23, 2020 at 2:21 PM what a super poem Kim, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx Kim Rodrigues January 23, 2020 at 6:29 PM Thank you, Jan!

Beata Agustin January 22, 2020 at 2:35 AM Wow! Congratulations. Thanks for sharing this... and your joyful juice. God bless you. Kim Rodrigues January 22, 2020 at 7:59 AM Thank you, sweet friend!

Caren Krutsinger January 21, 2020 at 9:21 PM This is wonderful! Great job! Congratulations! Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2020 at 9:23 PM Thank you, Caren! I had fun with it.

Paul Callus January 20, 2020 at 2:26 PM I can tell you racked your mind to produce this tongue twister, Kim, and even managed to get it to rhyme. Well done! Regards // paul Kim Rodrigues January 21, 2020 at 3:11 PM Thank you, Paul!

Joseph P. DiMino January 19, 2020 at 9:59 PM Sounds delightful! Your description and style are enchanting. Kim Rodrigues January 19, 2020 at 10:13 PM Thank you so much, Joe! :)

Carolyn Devonshire January 19, 2020 at 4:11 PM A delicious tongue twister, Kim. You had fun writing this, didn't you? Enjoyed reading. Best wishes in Nina's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Kim Rodrigues January 19, 2020 at 10:13 PM Yes I did, Carolyn! Sometimes the ideas flow... Hugs...Kim :)

Sandra Adams January 19, 2020 at 11:35 AM i have yet to be on a cruise, haven't desired to...probably because i'd be the one to get sea sick... good tongue twister Kim... best wishes in the contest... hugs Kim Rodrigues January 19, 2020 at 2:53 PM And this didn’t make you want to go cruising...lol. Thank you, Sandra!

Silent One January 19, 2020 at 6:02 AM Great use of alliteration to create a tongue twister.. Kim Rodrigues January 19, 2020 at 8:03 AM Thank you, Silent! :)

Demetrios Trifiatis January 19, 2020 at 5:52 AM I was not there but...surely I would have liked to be dearest, Kim! hahaha. Much enjoyed! Kim Rodrigues January 19, 2020 at 8:04 AM Thankfully I usually don’t get seasick. Thanks, Demetrios!

Gershon Wolf January 18, 2020 at 8:04 PM Those 'sleazy sponge sops' did me in! Thanks for the fun and the funniness. :) Gershon Kim Rodrigues January 19, 2020 at 8:04 AM LOL...thanks!

Running Wolves January 18, 2020 at 7:11 PM sounds like the morning after a frat party. well done Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2020 at 7:51 PM LOL...thank you!

Darlene De Beaulieu January 18, 2020 at 5:53 PM Hello Kim, this sounds good to me. may i have a glass of that juice? have a nice evening my friend. Kim Rodrigues January 18, 2020 at 6:27 PM LOL! Thanks, Darlene :)