Home » Poems » Paula Swanson » Joyful Autumn Dance

Joyful Autumn Dance

Joyful in its dance,
a leaf calls out to others...
Join the Autumn winds


Placement: 8th

natureautumnhaiku

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Brandee Augustus

Date: 9/24/2010 1:38:00 PM

Lovely! This actually made me smile to read this. Congratulations on your eighth place win!

John Freeman

Date: 9/12/2010 2:12:00 PM

Congrtulations Paula on your 8th place. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/7/2010 3:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/6/2010 4:36:00 PM

lovely, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/6/2010 10:57:00 AM

I love the way you made the one leaf so unique, calling out to its friends! congratulations. Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/5/2010 10:05:00 PM

A joyous haiku Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie

Tahera Mannan

Date: 9/5/2010 8:56:00 PM

Very imaginative haiku. Many congratulations on this win.

Audrey Haick

Date: 9/5/2010 7:50:00 PM

Beautiful imagery, Paula! I can see this so clearly. Beautiful...Love, Audrey P

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/5/2010 6:58:00 PM

Congratulations on the 8th place win for your nice write, Paula

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 9/5/2010 5:40:00 PM

Beautiful personification here, dear Paula. Congrats on your win. Love, iolanda

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/5/2010 5:37:00 PM

Congrats, Paula. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/5/2010 5:06:00 PM

Congrats Paula on your big win in Rick's contest.. a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight with luv my friend..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/5/2010 5:00:00 PM

Wonderful...congrats on your win..Joyful in its dance..thats very nice. BG

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/3/2010 9:45:00 AM

OH, is this for the DAnce contest? If so, what a lovely idea!

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/2/2010 11:59:00 PM

Great beauty in these lines. Love and best wishes...Ravindra ...Paula S

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/1/2010 7:50:00 AM

lovely, I think the "dancing leaves" are my favourite time of year

Sarah Hales

Date: 9/1/2010 12:14:00 AM

love this ... Thank you for your kind remarks on my win xxsarah xx

Skat A

Date: 8/31/2010 7:22:00 PM

Love & enjoyed reading your haiku*~SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/31/2010 11:49:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Paula. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/31/2010 5:32:00 AM

well written haiku!

Liz Walsh

Date: 8/31/2010 3:24:00 AM

Lovely, Liz-

Joe Flach

Date: 8/30/2010 10:10:00 PM

Terrific Haiku. Paula. Way to go Paula! (Sorry, couldn't help it - a line from "An Officer and a Gentleman" just somehow slipped out.) Joe

Joyful Autumn Dance

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment

Member Area

Soup Social

Member Poems

Member Poets

Famous Poems

Famous Poets

Poetry Resources