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Joyful Autumn Dance

Joyful in its dance,
a leaf calls out to others...
Join the Autumn winds


Placement: 8th

Copyright © Paula Swanson | Year Posted 2010

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Brandee Augustus

September 24, 2010 at 1:38 PM

Lovely! This actually made me smile to read this. Congratulations on your eighth place win!

September 12, 2010 at 2:12 PM

Congrtulations Paula on your 8th place. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown

September 7, 2010 at 3:52 AM

Congratulations on your win Paula in Rick Parise's contest "A Leaf In The Wind (Autumn)". Love, Carol

Francine Roberts

September 6, 2010 at 4:36 PM

lovely, congrats on your win

Andrea Dietrich

September 6, 2010 at 10:57 AM

I love the way you made the one leaf so unique, calling out to its friends! congratulations. Andrea

Connie Marcum Wong

September 5, 2010 at 10:05 PM

A joyous haiku Paula. Congratulations on your win. Blessings, Connie

September 5, 2010 at 8:56 PM

Very imaginative haiku. Many congratulations on this win.

September 5, 2010 at 7:50 PM

Beautiful imagery, Paula! I can see this so clearly. Beautiful...Love, Audrey P

September 5, 2010 at 6:58 PM

Congratulations on the 8th place win for your nice write, Paula

Iolanda Scripca

September 5, 2010 at 5:40 PM

Beautiful personification here, dear Paula. Congrats on your win. Love, iolanda

September 5, 2010 at 5:37 PM

Congrats, Paula. Nice going. Ralph

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

September 5, 2010 at 5:06 PM

Congrats Paula on your big win in Rick's contest.. a lovely write and win for u to enjoy tonight with luv my friend..

Barbara Gorelick

September 5, 2010 at 5:00 PM

Wonderful...congrats on your win..Joyful in its dance..thats very nice. BG

Andrea Dietrich

September 3, 2010 at 9:45 AM

OH, is this for the DAnce contest? If so, what a lovely idea!

Ravindra K Kapoor

September 2, 2010 at 11:59 PM

Great beauty in these lines. Love and best wishes...Ravindra ...Paula S

Francine Roberts

September 1, 2010 at 7:50 AM

lovely, I think the "dancing leaves" are my favourite time of year

September 1, 2010 at 12:14 AM

love this ... Thank you for your kind remarks on my win xxsarah xx

August 31, 2010 at 7:22 PM

Love & enjoyed reading your haiku*~SKAT

Carol Sunshine Brown

August 31, 2010 at 11:49 AM

Enjoyed reading your poetry today Paula. Love, Carol

Doris Culverhouse

August 31, 2010 at 5:32 AM

well written haiku!

August 31, 2010 at 3:24 AM

Lovely, Liz-

August 30, 2010 at 10:10 PM

Terrific Haiku. Paula. Way to go Paula! (Sorry, couldn't help it - a line from "An Officer and a Gentleman" just somehow slipped out.) Joe

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