Joy Ridin'

Fer the life of me I jes' can't figger kids out today!
With their automobiles they make a most tawdry display!
Seems their jalopies with geegaws and gadgets they adorn.
(My '37 Ford played "Mary Had A Little Lamb" on its horn!)

They roar up and down congested city streets,
With their boom-boxes blarin' head-throbbin' beats.
They rev their engines to display that awesome power.
(My '37 Ford's 65 horses could make nigh fifty miles per hour!)

They spin their tires when speedin' off with pedal to the floor.
Their mufflers leavin' behind an ear-splittin' roar.
From the senior crowd like me they get a scornful frown.
(My '37 Ford had straight pipes - cops invited me to leave town!)

Some kids have their cars jacked up high in the rear.
Other's have low-riders which seems mighty *****.
I've tried to figger the reasons fer that to no avail.
(My '37 Ford sported  spot lights - on the aerial a foxtail!)

My Dad used to ask, "Why put all that stuff on yer car?
It don't add to the value and really looks quite bizarre!"
I suppose all we can do is let the kids have their fling.
(Lookin' back to my youth, it seems I did the very same thing!)

Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 5/13/2010 12:55:00 PM
Ha, I really like this. I guess it is just a phase, a lot of things are phases, and we all think some things are cool at one point in time. Great write. BD
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Date: 5/13/2010 8:17:00 AM
Cool write Bob ..another "beauty" and luv your use of word play as always.. rhyme perfection.. and I do recall when my boys were acting this way too.. its a phase ...luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 5/12/2010 1:14:00 PM
Oh those memories - mine was a 52 Chevy Dark green.
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Date: 5/12/2010 12:14:00 PM
Those rollin' juke joints are something else...I think that is entirely new thing myself...Keep the creative well planned and penned poems flowing...Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work...Sara
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Date: 5/12/2010 11:06:00 AM
Robert, I LOV'd the work. Seems every generation has it's style. Here's hoping you might still have that 37 Ford in the garage, for myself I'd like to have a 50 Olds "Bubble Coupe," the original Muscle Car. Congratulations on retirement, it took a lot of service to get those stripes, rockers and hash marks, we all thank you.
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Date: 5/12/2010 10:36:00 AM
We do sound like our parents, don't we? They listened to rock and said, "That's not music." They watched the Beatles and said, "A drum and some guitars don't make a band." Now when I listen to hip hop, I feel like an old fogie complaining about it. Thanks for the trip down memory lane, Bob! Love, Carolyn
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