Joy of Love Premiere Contest Winner

Flower of desert
resplendent at dawn
withered at sunset
firework splendor
brightening heart
few instants
vanishing
like dew drops
are possessions 
rags shed
at the gate
only covering
love hope and faith. 
love being the greatest
mirroring a child's heart 
carefree, adventuresome
full of fun and laughter
a jump
into arms of waiting parent
trusting is being loved  
and happy to love back
but parents 
in whose arms do they jump 
trusting will be provided
with festive bread and wine?
Parent of all parents
to Whom belongs the past 
in whose hands
the future rests 
known to give the best
for happiness and health
seeds to plant and harvest 
life to life restart
body of beauty and strength
to follow His sweet commands
with Sundays resting stops
to pray and reflect
on how one missed a sign 
and switch on reverse
to get back on path
and reach the finish line
Paradise of playful
joyful rest
and who in truth can doubt
looking at the Crucified
His eternal love for us
His children for whom He died?

A Brian Strand Premier Contest No 1198

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 3/23/2023 9:11:00 AM
This poem beautifully captures the fleeting nature of life and the importance of love, hope, and faith, leaving the reader with a sense of joy and wonder. Well done!
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Date: 3/16/2023 11:51:00 AM
This is a great contemplative reflection on the transience of life and the importance of love and hope. Your use of vivid and symbolic imagery adeptly conveys your message and makes it more impactful. I especially liked how you set the stage with the contrasting image of the desert flower that blooms at dawn and whithers at sunset.
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Date: 3/16/2023 5:49:00 AM
Wonderful, Frances, congratulations:)
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Date: 3/16/2023 12:11:00 AM
A grand beautiful poem. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/15/2023 10:18:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 3/15/2023 5:04:00 PM
Oh this is terrific Frances. Nicely done! Congratulations on your win! :)
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Date: 3/15/2023 12:54:00 PM
- Congratulations a joy to read, Francis :) -
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Date: 3/15/2023 10:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win Francis. This is so filled with vibrant, living imagery. Sending you blessings.
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