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1st in Shaped Haiku (Sponsor: JCB Brul)

Judged: July 1st, 2025

Joy in the Night

___________________long days...... long f|a|c|e|s
                                                                               
                                                                                 
                                  boasted w!shes for swift ends    ()
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                                                                                l  l
                                                                                l  l
                                                                                l  l
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 your m        n   changed my he@rt__ __/\_/   \      /      \   /\_.*
            o  o                                                    \   /         \/  
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Callus Avatar
July 6, 2025 at 1:16 AM
Wow... you're very creative, Trina! Congratulations on a most deserved win! ~ Regards // paul
mysore Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 7:03 PM
OH! lovely. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers!!!
Fowler Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 7:25 AM
Inventive and romantic. Congratulations Trina! :)
Dietrich Avatar
July 1, 2025 at 11:11 PM
Sweet win. Congrats
Layne Avatar
July 2, 2025 at 5:01 AM
Thank you, Andrea. Congratulations on your top win as well! Blessings ~ TL.
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