Joy in the Night

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1st in Shaped Haiku (Sponsor: JCB Brul)

Judged: July 1st, 2025

___________________long days...... long f|a|c|e|s
                                                                               
                                                                                 
                                  boasted w!shes for swift ends    ()
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 your m        n   changed my he@rt__ __/\_/   \      /      \   /\_.*
            o  o                                                    \   /         \/  
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