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Joy and Jinks

JOY and JINKS
                                  

                  Jolly jocund jubilant Jack Frost wearing thick jacket
                  joyfully jumped sharp on snow losing jade-locket                              
                  Jolted backward by snowstorm yet looked jovial.
                  Jeered on a jetty jackal rushing from jungle, not trivial.
                          
               Junior Jack in jean- jersey with sister Jill Joined to skate.
               Jim Jogged, carrying jars of jam, jelly, jaggery in basket.
              Jingle bells ringing, Jack jigging, drinking juice from jug.
              Joe, friend of Jack drove jerking jeep, met Jack, gave hug. 
                          
              John, a Joker cum juggler catching and throwing snowballs 
              Jupiter-Juno both jocose junketing under heavy snowfall.  
              Jewel thief Jacob fell on snow, picked the lost jade-stone.
              Javelins- throw on snowy field managed by Jacqueline alone.
                         


  12/17/20
                                                     Second Place

    Alliteration   Contest by Eve Roper
                                                                Second Place
   Podium Placing Promise (6) Contest by Brian Strand.
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Chamberlain Avatar
December 23, 2020 at 1:52 AM
Your poem was a fun read. Congratulations on your winning placement.
Agustin Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 9:50 PM
Wow! Congrats! Cheering you amidst blest Christmas spirit, while sharing with you "... the gift of God is eternal life through Jesus Christ our Lord" (Romans 6:23 of the King James Bible). God bless you.
Roper Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 7:52 PM
Anisha, congratulations on your win. May your family celebrate an enjoyable Christmas with not only gifts, but with faith, hope and peace of the Lord. Hugs Eve
Ranaweera  Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 12:59 PM
Simply your choice of words to create alliterative sounds is jolly, jolly, jolly good, Anisha!!
Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2020 at 12:36 PM
- J... just joyful, Anisha :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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