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Joy and Friendship

Autumn's super moon is dazzlingly bright, The Earth Princess views the super in a milky light. Seasonal joy fills the poet's soul and cunning, Clad in green, the landscape is rather stunning. God made the moon and the brain the same way, One side is clever, while the other is a dark display. As yet, this upbeat side is still in prevailing sight If one disregards the darkness, he is all right. By virtue of its best features, the moon, and mind, Inspire all living creatures on Earth with your kind. Greens, mammals, flowers, people, and ecology, We are thrilled by the moon and life's company. Everyone gains widespread joyful calmness, Water swells in the arch mimicking politeness. Incidentally, they view, that the lily comes from the brain, Fall is marked by joy and pretty blooms and birds again.
Written: July 24, 2022 8th Contest Winner Joy Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh
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Goldsmith Avatar
August 12, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely "Joy And Friendship" write and beautiful picture. I love this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................
Mcintosh Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 7:27 AM
Lovely words and whispers of light... joy untold. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
George Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 4:23 AM
Moon and brain coupled together to show the bright and dark sides.... ! Congratulations on your great win !
Alex Avatar
August 11, 2022 at 1:07 AM
A very beautiful scene with a very enchanting couplet.
Baker Avatar
July 30, 2022 at 7:34 AM
A great entry for the contest, Lasaad, it brought joy to my soul. The beauty of the imagery and the soothing flow of your poetry bring joy and peace to the blessed reader. Bill
Proxenos Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 1:24 PM
Full marks, go to the top of the class. this poem is really awesome, to compare the moon and the brain s totally inspiring. I had a similar though which will always stay in my memory bank. an intellectual superb, heartfelt might which i read at least three times. Well penned Sotto and this one goes to my faves, but as number 1. Hugs and blessings Lesaad my friend, Jennifer
Poet Avatar
July 27, 2022 at 6:32 PM
Dear friend Jennifer, I am indebted to you for the encouraging words that you have provided. I'm delighted to hear that you enjoy it, and I can't tell you how much I value each and every one of your comments—not to mention the favorite.
Dietrich Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 1:28 PM
very interesting how you paired moon and brain, Sotto. Lovely imagery.
Pandit Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 5:57 AM
A poem as beautiful as autumn's joy, my friend. Enjoyed the vibrant verses invoking revelry of the season. Best to you, Lasaad.
George Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 5:20 AM
There is the conglomeration of light and darkness in life and in the universe. Those who are able to sift light from darkness, they derive joy! Wise thoughts and a beautiful entry for the contest !
Buhagiar Avatar
July 25, 2022 at 1:59 AM
Beautiful picture and great argument, though the brain is dark because it is our choice.
Tor Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 8:32 PM
Lasaad the beauty in the picture and the complimentary words that follow are well appreciated by the reader. Marvelous my friend. Bless ings your way...
Horsman Avatar
July 24, 2022 at 7:43 PM
Wow, this is a powerful entry for the contest, Lasaad. Love it.
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