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Autumn's super moon is dazzlingly bright, The Earth Princess views the super in a milky light. Seasonal joy fills the poet's soul and cunning, Clad in green, the landscape is rather stunning. God made the moon and the brain the same way, One side is clever, while the other is a dark display. As yet, this upbeat side is still in prevailing sight If one disregards the darkness, he is all right. By virtue of its best features, the moon, and mind, Inspire all living creatures on Earth with your kind. Greens, mammals, flowers, people, and ecology, We are thrilled by the moon and life's company. Everyone gains widespread joyful calmness, Water swells in the arch mimicking politeness. Incidentally, they view, that the lily comes from the brain, Fall is marked by joy and pretty blooms and birds again.
Written: July 24, 2022 8th Contest Winner Joy Poetry Contest Sponsored by Regina McIntosh

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Date: 8/12/2022 1:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely "Joy And Friendship" write and beautiful picture. I love this one. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away................
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Date: 8/11/2022 7:27:00 AM
Lovely words and whispers of light... joy untold. God bless you and Congrats. Love, Gina
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Date: 8/11/2022 4:23:00 AM
Moon and brain coupled together to show the bright and dark sides.... ! Congratulations on your great win !
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Date: 8/11/2022 1:07:00 AM
A very beautiful scene with a very enchanting couplet.
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Date: 7/30/2022 7:34:00 AM
A great entry for the contest, Lasaad, it brought joy to my soul. The beauty of the imagery and the soothing flow of your poetry bring joy and peace to the blessed reader. Bill
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Date: 7/27/2022 1:24:00 PM
Full marks, go to the top of the class. this poem is really awesome, to compare the moon and the brain s totally inspiring. I had a similar though which will always stay in my memory bank. an intellectual superb, heartfelt might which i read at least three times. Well penned Sotto and this one goes to my faves, but as number 1. Hugs and blessings Lesaad my friend, Jennifer
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Date: 7/27/2022 6:32:00 PM
Dear friend Jennifer, I am indebted to you for the encouraging words that you have provided. I'm delighted to hear that you enjoy it, and I can't tell you how much I value each and every one of your comments—not to mention the favorite.
Date: 7/25/2022 1:28:00 PM
very interesting how you paired moon and brain, Sotto. Lovely imagery.
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Date: 7/25/2022 5:57:00 AM
A poem as beautiful as autumn's joy, my friend. Enjoyed the vibrant verses invoking revelry of the season. Best to you, Lasaad.
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Date: 7/25/2022 5:20:00 AM
There is the conglomeration of light and darkness in life and in the universe. Those who are able to sift light from darkness, they derive joy! Wise thoughts and a beautiful entry for the contest !
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Date: 7/25/2022 1:59:00 AM
Beautiful picture and great argument, though the brain is dark because it is our choice.
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Date: 7/24/2022 8:32:00 PM
Lasaad the beauty in the picture and the complimentary words that follow are well appreciated by the reader. Marvelous my friend. Bless ings your way...
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Date: 7/24/2022 7:43:00 PM
Wow, this is a powerful entry for the contest, Lasaad. Love it.
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