Journeying Through Mountains

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Majestically they've stood since time had its start
rising on a cartographer's global elevational chart
Mountain ranges, wondrous works of God's creation
that eyes have beheld for centuries with fasination

Come along with me on this adventure as my ally
to the towering mountains as they reach for the sky
Let's honor them in our traveling journal of rhyme
penning of their beauty after the challenge of a climb

We'll walk along the Great Smoky ridges of misty blue
much closer to where clouds leave their traces of dew
On to the Catskills, and Appalachians in the Northeast
The States have many ranges, a mountain lover's feast!

We'll journey West to the Rockies to visit Pike's Peak
marveling at the views that tourists call its 'mystique'
We can take the Cog Railway to the top, hike it or drive
Isn't it wonderful that mountains make us feel so alive?

The Northwest's Cascades allow us to climb up three
from their crests, The Pacific Ocean we'll be able to see
Mt. St. Helens, Shasta, and the picturesque, Rainier
For you and I, my faithful ally, will have nothing to fear

Now we'll fly across that ocean to the island of Hawaii
Trek through rain forests and shade of a banyon tree
To the summits of Mauna Kea and Mauna Loa we'll go
Then leave volcanic shores in search of mounts of snow

Our destination-Mt. Fuji on the Japanese island of Honshu
We'll reach its grand summit, if it's the last thing we do
Success will be ours, then press on to the highest of all
Mount Everest stands at almost thirty thousand feet tall

The Himalayans are a challenge many climbers have taken
Our adventure'd be incomplete if this one we had forsaken
Travel time is growing short so we must again move on
Up the slopes of Olympus, Vesuvius, and the Matterhorn

To mountain tops we have missed, I'll soon be traveling
and catch a glimpse of those views that are simply dazzling
You're welcome to join me again, as my ally in the clouds
where we'll find complete serenity, away from noisy crowds

August 12th, 2017
Mountains contest
Sponsor: Julie Rodeheaver

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/15/2018 9:21:00 AM
Hard to believe I hadn't read your first post Lin. It's lovely. I love the mountains. You've mentioned some I have yet to visit. I used o drive to various parts of the southern Appalachians on a regular basis and love them. My baby sister when I was young used to tell horror stories about the Catamounts that lived in the Catskills. Have you heard of the uwharries in NC? They were once thought to be as high as 22,000' but are now barely 1000'. Possibly the oldest range in the world.
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Date: 8/18/2017 4:51:00 AM
Congratulations, Lin.
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Date: 8/18/2017 5:01:00 AM
Thank you very much, Subimal.
Date: 8/17/2017 9:21:00 AM
Congratulations for not neglecting to acknowledge The Artist. Your talent is Divine, too.
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:37:00 PM
Thank you, Hannah. I could never neglect the Creator.
Date: 8/17/2017 3:44:00 AM
Wow! This is so impressive Lin. I can tell you put a lot of time and thought into it. Big congratulations on your well deserved First Placement Lin! You wrote a beautiful informative work of art! Actually we do have snow atop Mauna Kea. Mauna Kea means "white mountain" in Hawaiian, and according to Hawaiian mythology, Poli'ahu, a goddess of snow, lives there. : )
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:37:00 PM
It's been many years since I've been there, Connie, but I do remember walking on the black sand beach. Thank you for the congrats...they're appreciated.
Date: 8/17/2017 12:44:00 AM
Sensational this adventure to the heights! Congrats on 1st place. :) Sunita
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:36:00 PM
Thanks, Sunita.
Date: 8/16/2017 6:52:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Lin.
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:35:00 PM
Thanks a bunch, Agnes.
Date: 8/16/2017 3:56:00 PM
I very much enjoyed this beautiful poetic journey through Earth's magnificent mountain ranges, Lin. Congratulations on your well-deserved First Place win! Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/17/2017 4:35:00 PM
Thank you most kindly, Sandra. Your remarks are always so nice.
Date: 8/16/2017 12:43:00 PM
I meant to say congratulations Lin! sorry for the typo!
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Date: 8/16/2017 12:45:00 PM
I thought it was funny...not to worry, Heidi.
Date: 8/16/2017 8:37:00 AM
What a beautiful journey you took us on Lin....Great write and win...Congrats
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Date: 8/16/2017 9:25:00 AM
Thanks, Joseph. I appreciate the visit and comments.
Date: 8/16/2017 8:00:00 AM
Congratulations Lin!
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Date: 8/16/2017 8:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Mike.
Date: 8/16/2017 7:52:00 AM
Congrats!!! my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:54:00 AM
Thank you very much, WW.
Date: 8/16/2017 7:40:00 AM
Congrats on 1st place , Lin!
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:47:00 AM
Merci, monsieur!
Date: 8/16/2017 7:34:00 AM
Congratulations LIN :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:47:00 AM
Wrong poet, Heidi.
Date: 8/16/2017 7:31:00 AM
Lin, you have outdone yourself with this fabulous write! A poetic dream. Congrats on your much deserved win!
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:46:00 AM
Thank you very much, Kim.
Date: 8/16/2017 7:14:00 AM
Congrats Lin!
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Date: 8/16/2017 7:18:00 AM
Thanks, Vijay. It's much appreciated.
Date: 8/16/2017 5:35:00 AM
It was fun travelling with you all along the mountainous climb! Congrats on a well deserved win"
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Date: 8/16/2017 5:43:00 AM
I was happy you climbed along with me. Thanks very much, Sushma.
Date: 8/16/2017 2:42:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Lin - wow a first place when you are so busy looking after the 'twins'... Is this where you met Mr Llama in the mountains lol lol lol. Seriously many congrats congrats Lin on a very well deserved top spot:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/16/2017 5:42:00 AM
The twins are grazing. I weaned them asap. lol Thank you very much for the kind remarks, Jan.
Date: 8/16/2017 12:33:00 AM
Awesome win, Lin!! So happy to see this at the top of the list, and SO deserving! A gorgeous write filled with so much visualization and imagination, and like a poem from my Bucket List! Almost ALL those places are on my list, and my favorite is Fuji, as I adore Japanese culture, (then Kilimanjaro). I feel like I've been there now - Love it, Dear Friend - congratulations!
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Date: 8/16/2017 5:41:00 AM
Thank you very much, Greg.
Date: 8/14/2017 4:43:00 AM
You make the journey sound so real :) It's lovely how you have a line in about each of the many mountains you mention and 'ally in the clouds' sounds amazing. Hope this does very well in the contest! :)
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Date: 8/16/2017 5:41:00 AM
Thanks ever so much for your thoughts, Sneha. Your hope became a reality.
Date: 8/13/2017 6:50:00 AM
Wow! Now you've made me climb all those high mountains! Huff, puff, huff, I enjoyed the climb, dear Lin;)
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Date: 8/16/2017 5:39:00 AM
lol what cute comments, Jo. Next time we'll climb at a slower pace and take more oxygen. Thanks, sweet friend.
Date: 8/13/2017 5:39:00 AM
I learned a lot about mountains, while reading your poem. I live in this flat country and know NOTHING about mountains :D
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Date: 8/13/2017 5:43:00 AM
Then you'll have to be my ally as we dream about journeying there together. I used to live where I had a view of Pike's Peak. The Rockies are beautiful, but I'm back in the South...flat land or not, in fact it's below sea level here, and I don't plan on leaving again. Thanks very much, Darren.
Date: 8/13/2017 1:20:00 AM
So many mountains with much more fascinating words ... beautiful ... Btw, thanks for liking my crescent shadow ...
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Date: 8/13/2017 5:41:00 AM
you're welcome, and thank you for commenting on this one, Probir.
Date: 8/12/2017 1:53:00 PM
Well done. I enjoyed the journey...Have a nice day
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Date: 8/12/2017 8:33:00 PM
Thanks a lot for reading and commenting, Arturo.
Date: 8/12/2017 11:30:00 AM
Wow! You covered so many mountains so beautifully Lin.. good luck for the contest!
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Date: 8/12/2017 8:33:00 PM
Thanks so very much, Vijay.
Date: 8/12/2017 10:08:00 AM
what a wonderful journey Lin I was with you every step of the way:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/12/2017 10:11:00 AM
Gear up and fly over to the States. We can meet in the Smokies. Thanks, Jan.
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