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Premiere Contest WinnerJourney To Petra

A stairway of tinted boulders reveals The fable of old gods marking a past, Etched on tall red-stones divinely claimed… And as I ascend to touch a warm glow, My feet quiver among hallowed mounds Of blazing rocks, of sacred pillars. In awe, I listen to Jordan’s songs As one city’s heart flames through Siq winds Humming through early noon’s desert trail Which climbs inside my pulsed breath…until Tears stumble into a warm prayer On a rosy frame of blest temples. Journeying to Petra silences me, From tribal gems and inlay jars soaked in moonlit dust To camel rides with Beduoins exploring a grandeur I can only own within my thoughts… For its mystique spreads on life’s essence Where I greet the humble soul within. Foreign Travel Contest For Thvia Shetley Submitted 9/26/2017 -------------------------- City of Petra, Jordan-- one of the 7 wonders of the world *Siq-- the entrance that lies between Petra's red-hued mountains
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Cresswell Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 4:10 PM
I am so thrilled to find a poem of this magnitude about the place I love. Congratulations! Saved immediately to my treasure box.
Gentile Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 7:37 AM
Congratulations,Nette!
Barden Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 3:36 AM
One amazing place, isn't it, Nette? Built and carved out of solid stone ... amazing write about an incredible structure - congrats on your win! <3
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 8, 2017 at 2:53 AM
Congratulations, Nette on your great win with such a wonderful poem.
Shetley Avatar
October 7, 2017 at 1:50 PM
Well done on this piece and your placement in the Foreign Travel contest! I enjoyed the merging of your introspection with the experience around you.
Jasz Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 7:52 PM
Just joined this site . too many of you think you are poets...
Hamner Avatar
December 6, 2016 at 1:17 AM
Where is your poetry?
Bradfield Avatar
November 15, 2016 at 3:11 PM
Congratulations! Excellent work as always..Larry
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:58 PM
Congratulations, Nette! Lovely images!
Y. Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 6:40 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your top win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
Haight Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 4:27 PM
Nette, congratulations on your well-deserved First Place Trophy win for this amazing and beautiful poem about one of our Seven Wonders of the World! Hugs, Sandra
Sergi Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:58 PM
Congratulations, nette: I would classify this work as a poetic documentary, Great Write!
Maverick Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 3:40 PM
Congrats on the 1st spot here Nette, have you been to Petra? good to read today'
Kimathi Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 6:52 AM
Congrats Nette, for your well, deserved first placement!! ;-) I really enjoyed the poem!!
Godwin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 6:30 PM
You got the gold! Congrats. Your poem is truly beautiful ... CayCay
La France Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 5:47 PM
Nette congratulations on your win in the contest with this beautiful poem ~
Nayak Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:47 AM
wow! so picturesque ! very informative and fabulously penned Dear Nette, Congrats on your Top Win!!!! love, Anu:)
Martin Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:23 AM
Great idea using ancient Petra! Unexpected angle for the contest. Congrats! :-)
Medders Tobechi Avatar
November 10, 2016 at 11:18 AM
Congratulations on this mesmerizing, far away feeling that you get from this poem. I love to go there now.
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2016 at 4:58 PM
Beautiful and vivid descriptions, Nette! It sounds like an amazing place. Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings!
Devnath  Avatar
July 17, 2016 at 12:09 PM
Beautifully pictured connecting inner with the outer. Congrats on your win my lovely smiling friend. Loved always, bl
Richards Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 3:45 PM
I love your description of this fascinating place. I recently saw again a PBS documentary on this amazing sight !! Congrats once again !!
Callus Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:40 PM
Congratulations on placing first in this contest, Nette! Lucky me being presented with a chance to read this beautiful poem inspired by your travels in the Middle East. #7 Hugs ~ paul
Scars Avatar
July 16, 2016 at 2:00 PM
oh Nette, the second I read this I knew it was a winner...so insightful and informative...congrats on your top placement and thank you for being a part of my contest lady :)-luloo
Richards Avatar
May 9, 2015 at 8:31 PM
Just a few weeks ago, watched a documentary on this amazing place, and afterwards, had to find it for myself on Google Maps,and I was so fascinated !! I love that you chose to write of it. How fortunate that you were able to see it for yourself!!
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May 9, 2015 at 7:40 PM
Nette, it is beautiful-----Congratulations with your "Memorable Vacation win" Love LINDA
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