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Constance's 'Magical Journey Contest ~ February 22, 2025

I heard the sea call to me and the spell was cast. I followed with the magical rocks in my hand... willingly, I chose to obey their command. ~ by poet I hold three magic rocks, in my hand Rolling them over and over and over Leaving this reality behind, far behind With my feet bare, I walk upon the earth Gently cradling three smooth rocks to my breast Precious gifts given to me at my birth With a note: "Life's journey will be a test." Next month I'd reach the age of twenty-one So far, I've had no reason to feel fear I gazed at the waning light of the sun My hands rubbing the rocks that I hold dear I've cherished them since I can remember The note revealed they had magic powers saying, "In the sky, a burning ember would glow in the midst of rain showers." The rocks felt warm; blue skies were overhead Yet, the note mentioned that I'd be tested I worried about things: What should I dread? Rolling the rocks in my hands, I rested I sat on the sand as waves were crashing Clouds darkened the sky, and the rocks turned red Something in the sea was wildly thrashing Female voices I heard inside my head "Come." They called as raindrops started falling At first, I thought I was losing my mind but swam with the need to heed their calling. A new world ahead... old one left behind

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Date: 2/26/2025 6:10:00 AM
Oh a Journey ahead but up to the reader with only hints as to the destination and danger. I love it! Congratulations! Xo
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Date: 2/26/2025 6:40:00 AM
Thank you so much for your thoughts, Crystol. I appreciate your time.
Date: 2/25/2025 10:29:00 AM
Lin, I really do like what you've created. the end result seems to be following one's own dreams and inner voice(s) to a great discovery. Sounds like life when one has freedom to dream and try. I really like the idea. Smiles!!
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Date: 2/25/2025 1:45:00 PM
I'm always smiling, too when I read your take on my poetry. Thanks a bunch, Duke.
Date: 2/22/2025 10:00:00 AM
Love the imagery Lin, you take the reader on a magical journey to your destiny. Good luck in the contest, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Date: 2/22/2025 10:10:00 AM
Merci, Tom. It’s warming up today. From 30 to 70. Crazy!

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