Journey of a Feather

From a poultry house,
a feather spirals up to the air,
and sails to the skies,
with the help of strong winds.

While aloft, it flies past a burglar
trying to break into a popular
farm-store in a village.

…………It flies past a man
struggling to throw his brother’s
body into a pit, after a sour fight
concerning land inheritance.

…………It flies past a child
left in the morning cold
by its mother, who’s uncertain
about her mothering ability.

……………It flies past a shaman
taking his mystical concoction
for giving him dark, supernatural
abilities.

As the winds lose their strength,
the feather gently rests on the
doorstep of the village-chief’s
house.

If it could only speak and see, it would call
out the chief’s name,
and narrate to him about all
the things it saw around his chiefdom......
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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August 20, 2014 at 10:03 AM
Teddy, congratulations with your winning poem... Always~ Linda
Kimathi Avatar
August 22, 2014 at 6:01 AM
Thank you so much Linda. I really appreciate it! ^_^
Mehta Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Lovely story on feather. congrats on the win, Teddy
Kimathi Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Johnson Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:08 AM
Congratulations on your win with your feather story. Love, Joyce
Kimathi Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 2:14 AM
Thank you Joyce! ^_^
Konos Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 1:54 PM
Hey Everyone! When I said 'Off you go now' I didn't know you were totally going to blow my mind, not all of you at once! I am honored to have read your poetry. Thank You for entering my contest! Off You Go Now, Judy
Kimathi Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 2:13 AM
Welcome Judy,and thank you for applauding our work! ^_^
Bop Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 7:43 AM
Nice and easy read. Ideal presentation. Keep writing and sharing
Kimathi Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 9:03 AM
Thank you BOP! You are such a great source of motivation! :-) Blessings and Goodwill. Regards, Teddy.
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