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Journey of a Feather

From a poultry house,
a feather spirals up to the air,
and sails to the skies,
with the help of strong winds.

While aloft, it flies past a burglar
trying to break into a popular
farm-store in a village.

…………It flies past a man
struggling to throw his brother’s
body into a pit, after a sour fight
concerning land inheritance.

…………It flies past a child
left in the morning cold
by its mother, who’s uncertain
about her mothering ability.

……………It flies past a shaman
taking his mystical concoction
for giving him dark, supernatural
abilities.

As the winds lose their strength,
the feather gently rests on the
doorstep of the village-chief’s
house.

If it could only speak and see, it would call
out the chief’s name,
and narrate to him about all
the things it saw around his chiefdom......

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/20/2014 10:03:00 AM
Teddy, congratulations with your winning poem... Always~ Linda
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/22/2014 6:01:00 AM
Thank you so much Linda. I really appreciate it! ^_^
Date: 8/20/2014 6:15:00 AM
Lovely story on feather. congrats on the win, Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/20/2014 8:59:00 AM
Thank you very much Dr. Ram Mehta! :-)
Date: 8/20/2014 1:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your win with your feather story. Love, Joyce
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/20/2014 2:14:00 AM
Thank you Joyce! ^_^
Date: 8/19/2014 1:54:00 PM
Hey Everyone! When I said 'Off you go now' I didn't know you were totally going to blow my mind, not all of you at once! I am honored to have read your poetry. Thank You for entering my contest! Off You Go Now, Judy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/20/2014 2:13:00 AM
Welcome Judy,and thank you for applauding our work! ^_^
Date: 8/18/2014 7:43:00 AM
Nice and easy read. Ideal presentation. Keep writing and sharing
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 8/18/2014 9:03:00 AM
Thank you BOP! You are such a great source of motivation! :-) Blessings and Goodwill. Regards, Teddy.

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