Journey

~ JOURNEY to the center of me!~

Yield upon this blissful moment!
In, a cutting-edge welcoming,
This minute can only maintain-

Yesterday’s journey~ Desire~

The world inside my head, can think,
Deeper than a dream;
Up till now, anticipation has hovered my present thoughts
Day becomes night,
Night becomes day,
In a cave, I call my insanity.
Hallucination, raveling inside my head, 
I sit where my thoughts entwine with my elusive slumber.
Everything inside of me is lucid and lost in madness. 
I perceive the proper perception; 
to think is only a thought.

Today’s journey~ Sensation~

Barren thoughts never exit the aggression in my mind.
I stand among the crying thunder locked within my head.	
Of sweet flower they arise and bloom, above all shores,
I embrace the beauty of my deepest emotion.
Sands of time litter within my walls!
My thoughts sit and wait! 
Minimizing themselves down to a speckled dot.
They are a few, sweet and creepy,
Those grab my attention,

Tomorrow’s journey~ Pleasure~

Passion wilting upon yesterday’s memory.
Concentrating and unraveling every single knot.
And, still I go back and give that one look.
A hot steamy want, judged by my brainwaves.
Notions, follow a path and indulge with no escape.
Danger escapades into a naughty reflection, "I am my own diversion!"
My thoughts are thoughtless as they can be.
Brittle and little like you and me!
Still my journey continues to emerge with all the thoughts found in the center of me.

Everyday's journey~ Begins with………Determination……

by;pd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Craig Avatar
December 9, 2013 at 3:23 PM
Hi Linda, really loved this poem what a journey in our minds indeed loved the last verse and how you ended it :) BIG THANK YOU FOR YOUR KIND WORDS ON MY WORK BLESS YOU XX
Bono Avatar
September 6, 2013 at 11:04 AM
your words always take me on a very interesting journey. you make them flow sooo smooth. Colleen
Mohammed Avatar
August 29, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Your imagery is wonderful. I hope you don't mind me catching up on some of your work my friend.
Oyewole Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 12:36 PM
Hi Pd., I posted my first contest but it appears twice in the member contest page. How will I remove one from the page? Thank you~A.O
Rashid Avatar
April 30, 2013 at 12:40 PM
perfect words are ever divine..... to read such words iz a pleasure of mine
Lane Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 5:32 PM
Nice! Another awesome write my friend. It's all out the Journey!!! Take care
Lane Avatar
December 9, 2012 at 5:33 PM
sorry....meant to say "all about the journey." lol
Moore Avatar
December 4, 2012 at 7:36 PM
Wow! That's really captivating. I'm doing pretty good..actually today wasn't so good. But, it will get better, I'll just read your poetry! Hugs, Holly
Horsman Avatar
November 18, 2012 at 2:07 PM
wonderful Journey PD, free verse at it's very best... love the ending...
Awoh Avatar
October 19, 2012 at 5:04 AM
brilliant....piece
Kovrlija Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 8:57 PM
Great write!
Johnson Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 3:27 AM
thoughts an words seen as absurd, thoughts can reclaim, retreat, passion swings against and for, between us two its sweet...
Aroke Avatar
October 15, 2012 at 3:41 AM
Here,I can see a signature of merit.Shakespear can't bost of any superiority.
Ledwell Avatar
October 4, 2012 at 7:52 AM
PD, I loved this , cute :-)
Tacito Avatar
October 1, 2012 at 7:37 AM
I play a game by this poem's same name. Very similar vibes. This was very intense and gripping. The way it should be. *Goosebumps*
Babcock Avatar
September 28, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Every day begins with a new journey. What happens will determine the outcome. An insightful poem PD . love phyl
Alvez Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 10:00 PM
A wonderful verse. Reminds me of my poem, "The Voice Inside My Head"...So interesting the way the brain teases, taunts, excites and drives a poet to pen thoughts that would drive any one else mad! I love the passion of this poem which speaks again of what a fine poet you are. Cynthia
Scott Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 12:11 PM
JUST DROPED BY AGAI8N THOUGHT ASK HOW ARE YOU OK LIKE YOUR AVATAR STILL CANT FIGGER OUT HOW YOU ATTACH PICTURE WOULD YOU LET ME KNOW MATE THANKS LUV DAVIDSCOTT
Scott Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 12:10 PM
THE LINE THE WORLD INSIDE MY HEAD CAN THINK DEEPER THAN A DREAM I LIKE I ONLY WISH WHEN I WAS DREAMING MY DREAMS SO VIVIE THAT I HAD A PEN AND PAPER THERE BUT I SUPOSE IMPOSSIBLE AS I AM IN THE LAND OF NODD THANKYOU MATE FOR YOUR COMMENTS ON MINE XX DAVIDSCOTT
Baguio Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 6:37 AM
I like your poem because journey with determination is a fate of courage and victorious.
Kovrlija Avatar
September 27, 2012 at 5:56 AM
I really love your poetry!
Wellington Avatar
September 26, 2012 at 10:17 PM
There seems to be a mountain of complexities here PD, but thoughts well expressed. always a great write. One love my friend. Joy Wells
Wright Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 10:57 PM
Yes Sis! Well written and engaging poem. Barren thoughts never exit the aggression in my mind..wow...deep!
Kapoor Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 12:37 PM
What a beautiful way to start a journey in search of our own self, where Desires dominates seeking Sensation and Pleasure with Determination. With your thoughts we too have dived deep to search the truth of life, which differ from person to person. It was a joy reading this beautiful Poem of yours my friend and thank you for your kind & valuable comments on my last Poem. The things which we often miss in appearance, often are preserved well in our heart. Love & best wishes always..Ravindra.Poet D
Maverick Avatar
September 24, 2012 at 2:19 PM
hey P D..! seems to be a lot going on inside your mind and indeed this write; lots to sift through for me here girl.. Glad to have visited today. p s soup mail..)
Falotico Avatar
September 23, 2012 at 5:52 PM
You my love are the picture of determination !! Fantastic write from a deep Soul that glows. Luv n hugs Michael
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