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Journey

Walking the journey, we must be careful not to trip Over the fallen dead wood strewn along our path, Careful to step high, look high, relishing adventure Journey is taking up every rewarding, useful venture, Discovering and cultivating hope ‘til journey’s end Meanwhile cultivating a wealth of beautiful friends. Walking the journey, we must step over the stones Look beyond the weeds to enjoy yonder flowers, And when we reach them caress them to our face Journey means looking for messages to embrace, Sharing with hearts of those around us blessings For they, too, are walking the briery, stony paths. written September 11, 2021 especially for "J" Poetry, Old or New" Contest sponsored by Constance La France

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Constance La France

Date: 9/15/2021 6:16:00 AM

Milt, excellent and so true! And congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this beautiful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/15/2021 7:24:00 AM

Constance, thank you so much for your kindness and thoughtfulness. I appreciate you, and I enjoyed your contest.

Joseph May

Date: 9/13/2021 5:26:00 AM

Beautiful write Milton, Congrats on your win

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/13/2021 10:17:00 AM

Thank you a lot, Joseph. It is a compliment I treasure from you.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/13/2021 3:35:00 AM

Love this part: Look beyond the weeds to enjoy yonder flowers, And when we reach them caress them to our face/ A beautiful image. Congratulations, Milton!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/13/2021 10:17:00 AM

Thanks so much, Kim. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/12/2021 12:41:00 PM

This is what makes the journey worthwhile "Meanwhile cultivating a wealth of beautiful friends".

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/12/2021 5:50:00 PM

I think so. My journey has been so much richer for the friendships I have cultivated over the years. I had a friend from Mississippi arrive this evening and he will stay with me for two or three weeks or so. We've been friends since the service in the '60s. His wife died last year and he has been depressed, so it'll be good for him to be here with me.

Jenna Logan

Date: 9/12/2021 6:36:00 AM

Good morning, Milt. The journey is what we make it, usually based on attitude. Some of the stones in our path are ones thrown at us, but they won’t prevent us from our destination. I’ve been away due to things beyond my control but hope to return to the soup as soon as I’m able.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/12/2021 9:23:00 AM

Thanks for your thoughtful comment on my poem, Jenna. I, and others, are anxious for your return. We miss reading your exquisite poetry.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 9/11/2021 7:47:00 PM

JJ ust right for the contest... Good Luck...

Linda Craddick

Date: 9/11/2021 7:05:00 PM

I love your interpretation of the journey. Good luck in the contest! Linda

L Milton Hankins
Date: 9/11/2021 7:10:00 PM

Thank you so very much, Linda. I hope it does well, but one can never tell! I appreciate your read, your visit, and your thoughtfulness.