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Jolted by Twilight

A breath of light and suddenly I'm lost.  Catapulted by 
a mesmerizing scene of audacious beauty.
I'm a ringtone of arrival on a magic carpet ride, 
run me over with a feather, then let me repose   
Life on earth unhems, I let go of the mayhem inside  
sewn to the carpet of a foggy blue moon I finally meet
                             my muse *
face to face only we lay privy to this infinitesimal light
as it shines, shines, and shines;       
 
inside a celestial palindrome
a madam of leisure *
nothing can censure me here 
blast those blessed stars !

Copyright © Mystic Rose Rose | Year Posted 2024

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Sally Eslinger Date: 11/13/2024 8:25:00 AM You go girl! As i know you, i can believe this poem is a true story! An actual jolting by twilight that you’ve relayed in the telling so to have me right there with you…impacted & learning! Thank you! My hugs… Login to Reply

Joe Dimino Date: 11/12/2024 7:48:00 AM "I'm a ringtone of arrival on a magic carpet ride, run me over with a feather, then let me repose Life on earth unhems," -- Love that! You are poetry. Login to Reply

Daniel Henry Rodgers Date: 11/12/2024 7:01:00 AM Dear Rose, What a breathtaking journey through the ethereal. Your lyrical language beautifully captures that magical moment of inspiration and transcendence. Your words dance on the page, inviting the reader to join you on this enchanting "magic carpet ride" of creativity and self-discovery. Truly captivating! Autumn Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel Login to Reply

Yann Rolland Date: 11/12/2024 1:08:00 AM muse is essential for excellent poetry, so touching and subtle poetry, thanks poet Rose Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 11/11/2024 2:42:00 AM A deep poem that mesmerises many readers. Hugs. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/10/2024 10:27:00 AM pleasantly curious about the many personalities of your muse, dear vie...she must have lived lots of checkered and charmed lives!... lovely write Login to Reply

Maria Williams Date: 11/10/2024 2:40:00 AM Dearest Vie, your poem, beautifully captures the allure of transcendent moments, where beauty and mystery collide. The imagery evokes a magical journey—soft, surreal, and deeply introspective. Truly enchanting! A fave ...hugs Login to Reply

Hiya Sharma Date: 11/9/2024 9:32:00 AM Oh my, this is such a beautiful and mesmerizing poem dear sweet Rose... I'm in awe of your enthralling talent of painting magical experiences in such a deeply poetic manner. Your wordsmithery here is beyond soulful and whimsical, elevating my heart to a divine place ~ it gives a feeling of eternity, becoming free from any boundaries! "A breathe of light and suddenly I'm lost" Ahhh, that opening really spoke about it all! "sewn to the carpet of a foggy blue moon I finally meet my muse" wowww... Loved reading this, a FAVE for me! Sending you love and light always~ Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 11/9/2024 9:31:00 AM I love how you did this one my friend... we always meet our muse, eventually.. sometimes more than once.. Login to Reply

Susan Ashley Date: 11/9/2024 9:09:00 AM Dear Rose, soulful poetess, I'm enchanted by your journey back to your muse, "a madam of leisure"! I especially enjoyed "I'm a ringtone of arrival on a magic carpet ride" and "Life on earth unhems, I let go of the mayhem inside" - vivid and imaginative imagery! A beautiful revelation of poetry. Warmest wishes my sweet poet friend.. ~Susan Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 11/9/2024 8:43:00 AM Aha! A definitely moving piece, Vie:) hope you are doing well:) Login to Reply