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Jokers Lament

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Jokers Lament

eyes of deepest blue
lips sweet as maple syrup...
his dog loves him too

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Date: 1/11/2013 9:35:00 PM
lol...i love this..pd
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Date: 10/17/2012 11:40:00 AM
Very sweet indeed! Juniper
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Date: 9/10/2012 5:31:00 PM
so cute! Light & Love
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Date: 8/10/2012 10:29:00 PM
sure enjoy seeing this one again. Thanks for my place in your contest today, Carol.
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Date: 8/10/2012 5:04:00 AM
Very sweet senryu! loved it Carol..
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Date: 7/24/2012 12:38:00 PM
Love is not restricted to the human race as you show in this fine haiku. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 7/21/2012 6:56:00 PM
Very nice! Like it.
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Date: 7/21/2012 4:19:00 AM
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Date: 7/19/2012 3:13:00 PM
What more could a woman ask for in a man. Descriptive write. thanks ofr the comment on Depression
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Date: 7/18/2012 5:26:00 PM
So cute, Carol!! Glad to see a new poem up from ya.
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Date: 7/18/2012 5:07:00 PM
probably taken.
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Date: 7/18/2012 12:30:00 PM
Too good..
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Date: 7/18/2012 12:06:00 PM
oh, how succulent this is, carol with an ending that charms this page!... greeat job.. thanks for your encouraging cheers; they mean a lot to me.. love and huggs!..:)
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Date: 7/18/2012 5:32:00 AM
I like easy reading poetry and hope to see more like this. I had to smile and laugh at this one, so it is a good humour one.
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Date: 7/17/2012 1:16:00 PM
Reading your works is like talking to nature. I wish the best in your writing.
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Date: 7/17/2012 10:53:00 AM
I love your sense of humor .... Love, Suzette
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Date: 7/17/2012 9:31:00 AM
Sweet! :) Love, Tammy
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Date: 7/17/2012 8:57:00 AM
Thank goodness for a good dog. love, Kathy
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Date: 7/16/2012 1:35:00 PM
If his dog loves him, he gotta be cool. Love, daver
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Date: 7/16/2012 12:38:00 PM
lol, love this witty one, Carol
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Date: 7/16/2012 11:34:00 AM
Great senryu. Wit and a lovely image of blue eyes.
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Date: 7/16/2012 10:05:00 AM
lol. cute piece :)
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Date: 7/16/2012 9:47:00 AM
Very cool, Carol! I love a good senryu.
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Date: 7/16/2012 1:22:00 AM
Lovely. Well said. Tfs
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Date: 7/15/2012 5:40:00 PM
so i can picture a poetic mind churning and coming upon a few words that are quirky but at the same time inspiring....it takes real talent to put those two sentiments and mesh them together into a simply delightful poem here's hoping chicken litttle isn't correct in his assumption PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~
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