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Jokers Lament

eyes of deepest blue
lips sweet as maple syrup...
his dog loves him too

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Poet Destroyer A

January 11, 2013 at 9:35 PM

lol...i love this..pd

Juniper Lock

October 17, 2012 at 11:40 AM

Very sweet indeed! Juniper

Debbie Guzzi

September 10, 2012 at 5:31 PM

so cute! Light & Love

Andrea Dietrich

August 10, 2012 at 10:29 PM

sure enjoy seeing this one again. Thanks for my place in your contest today, Carol.

Matthew Anish

July 24, 2012 at 12:38 PM

Love is not restricted to the human race as you show in this fine haiku. Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Gail Debole

July 21, 2012 at 6:56 PM

Very nice! Like it.

Emmanuel Phiri

July 21, 2012 at 4:19 AM

A MAN FOR EVERY WOMAN,MAY I NOT BE BUT A MAN FOR MAY I BE,TO THE WOMAN. WORDS FROM THE HEART WHAT MORE CAN ONE ASK FOR,NICE PIECE CAROL

Anthony Nutter

July 19, 2012 at 3:13 PM

What more could a woman ask for in a man. Descriptive write. thanks ofr the comment on Depression

Andrea Dietrich

July 18, 2012 at 5:26 PM

So cute, Carol!! Glad to see a new poem up from ya.

John Loving Iii

July 18, 2012 at 5:07 PM

probably taken.

Nisath Jahan Laboni

July 18, 2012 at 12:30 PM

Too good..

Nette Onclaud

July 18, 2012 at 12:06 PM

oh, how succulent this is, carol with an ending that charms this page!... greeat job.. thanks for your encouraging cheers; they mean a lot to me.. love and huggs!..:)

Jennifer Spase

July 18, 2012 at 5:32 AM

I like easy reading poetry and hope to see more like this. I had to smile and laugh at this one, so it is a good humour one.

Omojevwe Emmanuel Brown

July 17, 2012 at 1:16 PM

Reading your works is like talking to nature. I wish the best in your writing.

Tammy Flanagan

July 17, 2012 at 9:31 AM

Sweet! :) Love, Tammy

Kathryn Collins

July 17, 2012 at 8:57 AM

Thank goodness for a good dog. love, Kathy

Daver Austin

July 16, 2012 at 1:35 PM

If his dog loves him, he gotta be cool. Love, daver

Jack Horne

July 16, 2012 at 12:38 PM

lol, love this witty one, Carol

Joann Grisetti

July 16, 2012 at 11:34 AM

Great senryu. Wit and a lovely image of blue eyes.

Black Eyed Susan

July 16, 2012 at 10:05 AM

lol. cute piece :)

Painted Hunter

July 16, 2012 at 9:47 AM

Very cool, Carol! I love a good senryu.

Ravi Sathasivam

July 16, 2012 at 1:22 AM

Lovely. Well said. Tfs

Jeffry Cohan

July 15, 2012 at 5:40 PM

so i can picture a poetic mind churning and coming upon a few words that are quirky but at the same time inspiring....it takes real talent to put those two sentiments and mesh them together into a simply delightful poem here's hoping chicken litttle isn't correct in his assumption PHREEPOETREE ~free cee!~