Joining In the Christmas Spirit

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Joining In the Christmas Spirit


Christmas songs of joy and laughter to be heard

      Heard inside people’s loving warm homes of Joy  

            Joy to join the holiday spirit, but I'm out here tired

                 Here tired of seeing the snow fall and being alone


 Being alone outside in crystalline white snow 

      Snow path of wet snow flakes from the rising sun rays

            Rays melting the deep white snow that glimmers

                   Glimmers of diamonds, silver tinsel, and green wreaths

         
 Wreaths I wear decorated with ribbons and lights 

      Lights aglow, tree bought with perched red robins

            Robins gather on branches flew me inside

                  Inside where children at play and I can be


Be a Snowman Christmas tree in a rightful place

      Place to see everyone uplifting cheerful warm smiles

            Smiles of joy when wishful gifts they open

                  Open with holiday spirit on Christmas day  





12/1/2015


Chain Verse 1 - Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by: Edward Ebbs

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2016 12:14:00 AM

Eve, Nice win... ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 1/2/2016 1:09:00 AM

EVE, Congratulations on your "Chain Verse 1 WIN". SKAT

Edward Ebbs

Date: 1/1/2016 9:55:00 PM

Eve, thank you for participating, good job and congrats on your third place!

Eve Roper
Date: 1/1/2016 11:17:00 PM

Thank you so I much, Edward!!!! You made my New Year's :-) Eve

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/2/2015 6:17:00 PM

very nicely done, Eve. Wow!

Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2015 7:18:00 PM

Wow!!! coming from you is an honor thank you! For that you get a great big Hug (.)

Eric Boddie

Date: 12/2/2015 10:22:00 AM

why do they try so hard to commercialize....the Faith you can find within my eyes....Christ Is Deeply Rooted Within my Soul....but they value Christmas with the number of gifts sold....Jesus Must Be The Reason For All The Joyful Songs....why do we just give in December when Christmas Is The Season That Is Eternally Long....just my thoughts about it ms eve but you did an amazing job....we just have to keep it going all year....;)

Eve Roper
Date: 12/2/2015 10:41:00 AM

Thank you, Eric, you are right it is something that I try very hard to do