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John a Dear Friend Gone

John a Dear Friend Gone
"I carry your heart with me(I carry it in my heart) I am never without it"  Quote _ by E.E. Cummings
Miss you John A dear friend has gone So used to Seeing you In the residents lounge room Now a place of gloom. No goodbyes Taken by surprise Though you fought The onslaught Of all you’d been going through We knew, John we knew. Though deceased In autumnal breeze We’ll hear you Behold you In displays of russet leaves Swirling down from trees. Seasons come And we are sure chum You'll be near Never fear When the cold north wind doth blow In sun, rain or snow. We’ll treasure The joy and pleasure Of time shared Of souls bared In our heart and memory Always, constantly. Time to fly To beyond the sky Carry love Up above A keepsake to heaven sent Sleep in sweet content.
*+* 14th September 2022 Writing Challenge - In My Heart - S Forms - Poetry Contest Sponsored by - Constance La France Theme chosen no.6 - Lost to Heaven - A Friend Poetry form - Shadorma Syllable count each 6 line stanza - (3/5/3/3/7/5)
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Kendrick Avatar
October 8, 2022 at 4:42 AM
Sorry for your loss in this person so close to you. Good to see it on the winners' list. Congratulations on your win. Way to go. Sara
La France Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 9:19 AM
Belle, a wonderful Shadorma series and congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge - In My Heart - "S" Forms, it is so painful to lose a friend to death, Constance
Edmonds  Avatar
October 7, 2022 at 5:44 PM
Thank you Constance, I enjoyed the challenge of writing in the Shadorma poetry form… Belle
Leffanta Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 11:44 AM
Ah, I did not understand, "Lost to Heaven" was a contest! but you found a great entry! Aloha!
Edmonds  Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 1:14 PM
Thank you Rico, “Lost to Heaven” is the theme of the contest - “In My Heart - S Forms” is the writing challenge of the contest… Belle, Maloha!
Buhagiar Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 9:03 AM
What a splendid poem even if a bit sad. But I love sad poems. Best for a win.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 1:06 PM
Thank you Victor, it is sad for us residents having friend passed on so sudden and unexpectedly… Belle
Tor Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 12:29 AM
Your loss is shown with this heartfelt piece Belle so sorry for you loss Dear...
Edmonds  Avatar
September 14, 2022 at 1:02 PM
Thank you Michael, John was a very nice man to know and all the residents of the lodge (39 apartments) are going to miss him being around… Belle
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