John 3:16

God's promise to the world means
that we only need to believe
He gave his only begotten Son
and we eternal life receive. 

Some parents know the anguish
of losing a beloved child.
Yet our God did that for us,
we sinners so defiled.

How many of us have thanked him
on our young or aged knees,
for the joy he has promised?
What have we done to please?

If we believe in Jesus
and profess His Holy Name,
our God has promised to us
and eternal life to claim.

This life is a short journey.
You'll know that when you're old.
Read the verse, believe his promise.
It's the way to stay well souled.

8/14/2014

Poem based on John 3:16.,

"For God so loved the world, he gave his only begotten son
that everyone who believeth in him, shall not perish but have ever-lasting life."
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Poteet Avatar
February 1, 2015 at 2:34 PM
well-souled, a great pun. Enjoyed this one too, Joyce.
Reese Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 9:57 AM
A well written poem. congrats on your 4th place win.
Jerden Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 7:38 AM
Well written exegesis of this famous verse! Cheers, Roy
Devonshire Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 5:57 AM
Dear Joyce, I see congratulations are in order. Bravo! In parochial school the nuns told us that God receives many prayers that make requests, but few that offer thanks. You made that point very eloquently. Love you, Carolyn
Walker  Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 1:30 AM
Well done Joyce. Congrats! Verlena
Mehta Avatar
August 19, 2014 at 6:23 AM
Nice write on spirituality, Joyce. congrats
A   Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 5:19 PM
Joyce, I love this one...Linda
Dietrich Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 3:17 PM
Big congrats, Joyce, on a well deserved win. You even did a new one for the contest, unlike me! A great scripture to have for one's favorite.
Andresen Avatar
August 18, 2014 at 12:50 PM
- Congratulations on your 4th place in the Bible Contest, Sponsored by: Regina Riddle - Lovely poem, Joyce - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Horne Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 5:02 PM
love this beautiful and thoughtful write, dear Joyce. Have a great weekend xx
Guzzi Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 1:52 PM
Looks like a great entry & shows your spirit! Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
August 15, 2014 at 6:41 AM
Absorbing spiritual write, Joyce.
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