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Jittery Jason

A jittery dude we call JASON Wanted to excel as a MASON He laid concrete down Then spread it around When dried he had someplace to PACE ON

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Rhoda Tripp

Date: 11/28/2017 4:52:00 PM

Ha! I love this, Ralph. I chuckled loudly and everyone stared at me. Very cute Limerick.

Pashang Salehi

Date: 11/17/2017 4:52:00 PM

Nice one....

Jack Horne

Date: 11/11/2017 2:26:00 PM

LOL, good one

Eve Roper

Date: 10/24/2017 9:10:00 PM

Congratulations, Ralph, on your win :) Hugs Eve ~`*

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/24/2017 4:58:00 PM

Ralph, this is so clever--well-done,! Janice

Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/25/2017 2:12:00 PM

Thank you , Janice!

Jan Allison

Date: 10/24/2017 4:48:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats RALPH:-) hugs jan xx

Patricia Cresswell

Date: 10/23/2017 2:56:00 PM

Thank you for the humour! Made me smile.

Carol B.

Date: 10/23/2017 12:36:00 PM

I enjoyed your limerick :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/22/2017 11:37:00 AM

very witty, ralph..i had fun with your jason!..huggs

Ralph Sergi

Date: 10/21/2017 3:36:00 PM

Thank you, Arthur! I changed cement to concrete

Jan Allison

Date: 10/21/2017 2:37:00 PM

Very clever limerick Frederick:-) hugs jan xx

Jan Allison
Date: 10/24/2017 4:48:00 PM

oops i must have been having a very senior moment I do apologise RALPH!:-( hugs Jan xx

Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/22/2017 4:43:00 PM

Who's Frederick?

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/21/2017 1:52:00 PM

Great limerick, although this could be "concrete" form too! :)

Ralph Sergi
Date: 10/21/2017 3:34:00 PM