Jittery Jason

A jittery dude we call
JASON
 Wanted to excel as a
MASON
He laid concrete down
Then spread it around
When dried he had someplace to
PACE ON
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Tripp Avatar
November 28, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Ha! I love this, Ralph. I chuckled loudly and everyone stared at me. Very cute Limerick.
Salehi Avatar
November 17, 2017 at 4:52 PM
Nice one....
Horne Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 2:26 PM
LOL, good one
Roper Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 9:10 PM
Congratulations, Ralph, on your win :) Hugs Eve ~`*
Canerdy Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 4:58 PM
Ralph, this is so clever--well-done,! Janice
Sergi Avatar
October 25, 2017 at 2:12 PM
Thank you , Janice!
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 4:48 PM
Dropping back with my congrats RALPH:-) hugs jan xx
Cresswell Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 2:56 PM
Thank you for the humour! Made me smile.
B. Avatar
October 23, 2017 at 12:36 PM
I enjoyed your limerick :)
Onclaud Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 11:37 AM
very witty, ralph..i had fun with your jason!..huggs
Sergi Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 3:36 PM
Thank you, Arthur! I changed cement to concrete
Allison Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 2:37 PM
Very clever limerick Frederick:-) hugs jan xx
Allison Avatar
October 24, 2017 at 4:48 PM
oops i must have been having a very senior moment I do apologise RALPH!:-( hugs Jan xx
Sergi Avatar
October 22, 2017 at 4:43 PM
Who's Frederick?
Vaso Avatar
October 21, 2017 at 1:52 PM
Great limerick, although this could be "concrete" form too! :)
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October 21, 2017 at 3:34 PM
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