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Jimmy Chongs Demise

There was this guy called Jimmy Chong
Lived on the outskirts of Hong kong
Married his first cousin Susy Dong
Her dad said  "Jimmy this is wrong."

On their honey moon they went to China
Susy's dad was determined to find her
To put an end to this misery and shame
Jimmy had brought on his family's name.

Well Jimmy had to keep one step ahead
Because old man Dong wanted him dead
He slept with one eye open when in bed
What Dong would do filled him with dread.

Jimmy only married Susy for her money
Didn't love her thought she looked funny
Now all Jimmy needed was her bank pin
When he had that, he would do her in.

At Guang Un Trang a little coastal town
Thats where old Dong tracked them down
He tied up Jimmy bundled him in his car
Drove to the cliffs which wasnt too far.

At the cliff he pushed him over the side
"A great shame you caused me "  old Dong cried
"You married young Susy against my wishes 
So now you can sleep with the fishes ".

Written on 29th of June 2018.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/10/2018 11:34:00 PM
Well as they say 'what goes around comes around', though I was kind of hoping that Jimmy would right the wrong. Great write Tom....Maria hugs
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Date: 7/11/2018 6:23:00 AM
Thanks Maria, even wrote a senyru, CHONG TOOK DONG FOR FOOL/ BROKE THE GOLDEN RULE,NOT COOL/ULTIMATE PRICE PAID / Tom.
Date: 7/10/2018 6:35:00 PM
haha, He got killed before HE could be the killer. I call this one Just Desserts. VERy nicely done.
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Date: 7/11/2018 6:13:00 AM
Thank you very much Andrea, in real life situations ,you think well it serves them right. Tom
Date: 7/4/2018 12:43:00 PM
Hi Tom, You have told an entertaining story with a dramatic end. Don't be messing with daddy's little girl. If you do it just might be your demise. Good story telling:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/4/2018 1:15:00 PM
Thank you Alexis, lucky my three daughters met nice boys so I didn't have to resort to cliff measures lol. Tom
Date: 7/4/2018 11:53:00 AM
Had to reread this one, Tom. It's even better the second time around. A FAVE now. Kudos! ~ Gershon
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Date: 7/4/2018 12:02:00 PM
Thanks Gershon, like a good wine it gets better with age lol, happy you enjoyed it. Tom. Happy 4th July
Date: 7/3/2018 4:43:00 PM
You entertain with your narrative, Tom! It's 'wong' to marry for money! Regards // paul
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Date: 7/3/2018 10:12:00 PM
Haha, thanks Paul, it certainly is. Greetings from Turkey. Tom
Date: 7/3/2018 11:05:00 AM
ohhh, how you clown around with a sharp wit... this made my day, tom!...huggs
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Date: 7/3/2018 4:38:00 PM
Thanks. Nette, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 7/3/2018 8:22:00 AM
- A good story with a dramatic end, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/3/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thanks Sunshine, still frying over here. Tom.
Date: 7/3/2018 6:58:00 AM
Funny but sad... Great rhymes though..
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Date: 7/3/2018 4:37:00 PM
Thank you SO. Tom.
Date: 7/3/2018 6:35:00 AM
Superbly written story that delights and saddens the reader! I have enjoyed that poem enormously my friend but not the conclusion! Excellent!
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:38:00 AM
Thank you Demetrios, there are more humane ways of dealing with evil crooks. Tom
Date: 7/3/2018 4:39:00 AM
A fabulous story, Tom, so well and fluently told. Enjoyed reading. its not worth getting married for money. T.J
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Date: 7/3/2018 6:36:00 AM
Thank you very much Teppo, I'm happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 7/3/2018 12:05:00 AM
Hi Tom.. I loved reading your fun poem this evening with a delightful bedtime tea. I look forward to reading more of your creative works tomorrow.. sleep well!
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Date: 7/3/2018 12:48:00 AM
Thank you Dave, glad you enjoyed it, love a bit of humour. Tom
Date: 7/2/2018 4:00:00 PM
i enjoyed this rhyming tale, tom!
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Date: 7/2/2018 4:48:00 PM
Thanks ilene, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 7/2/2018 3:08:00 PM
Love this kooky tale Tom! a) I often lie in bed filled with dread at what a Dong could do to me too and b) wonder if the Dong had a luminous nose? (useful for night-time murderin’ - or so I’ve heard)
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Date: 7/2/2018 4:47:00 PM
Haha Nina, love your comment, yes dongs can be very dangerous if wronged. Not sure about the luminous bit lol
Date: 7/2/2018 1:52:00 PM
what an ending ......mafiosi style blast-off.
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Date: 7/2/2018 4:44:00 PM
Haha Rajat, it certainly doesn't pay to wrong a dong, that's for sure.
Date: 7/2/2018 12:13:00 PM
Such a creative romp, Tom! Really enjoyed this one. Your Muse was in full bloom for this one! Kudos! Best always, Gershon
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Date: 7/2/2018 12:24:00 PM
Was relaxing in the shade when I thought this one up, love a bit of humour, happy you enjoyed it. Tom
Date: 7/2/2018 10:34:00 AM
An Italian ending to a delightful and entertaining tale that lifted my grin all the way into a smile! Your imagination is quite healthy - don't ever doubt that! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
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Date: 7/2/2018 12:26:00 PM
Thank you CayCay, happy it brought a smile to your face. A bit of humour never goes amiss lol. Tom