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Jimi Hendrix..Rock Star and Legend

J imi, a talented guitarist I n the world of Rock M ade young girls cry I n his world, how he shined! H ard wired to play E arly love for guitars N ever found Nirvana D ying each day, endless pain R iding strings of his music I n his mind, demons taunted X iting too soon, young legend!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2011 9:12:00 PM

oh,my goodness, why did so many people do Jimi? But he sure made an impression on you all and your poem is fantastic, Annalise. Very cool acrostic. Congratulations.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/23/2011 4:49:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Audrey in Chris Matt's contest "Gone Too Soon". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/22/2011 8:36:00 AM

Hendrix poured his heart into his music, Annalise, and I think you are right in saying he was "dying each day." He turned to drugs because he couldn't leave the Vietnam War behind him. Big congratulations on your wonderful win! Love, Carolyn

Elaine George

Date: 3/22/2011 8:14:00 AM

What a creative, Acrostic honoring such a talented man, Annalise. Many congrat's on your well-deserved win. Lainie

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/22/2011 2:03:00 AM

Hey there Annalise, congratulations on your win in Matt's contest, love Wilma

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/21/2011 8:53:00 PM

A great tribute to this legend. Heartiest congratulations for this win.

Jeff Eklund

Date: 3/21/2011 8:30:00 PM

Very creative, great job

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/21/2011 8:09:00 PM

Congrats Annalise on your super win in Gone Too Soon contest my friend.. so many Jimi poems and all so special.. enjoy my friend..

James Fraser

Date: 6/16/2010 3:14:00 PM

Another sad loss to the Rock Industry, incredible guitarist. You have captured Jimi well Audrey >> James

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/1/2010 11:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Audrey. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/31/2010 4:58:00 PM

Audrey - wonderful tribute to a great artist - who like many others died far too soon - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, MJ

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/31/2010 10:28:00 AM

Many congrats on your wonderful acrostic tribute to a great man being featured this week. Rgds Janette

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/30/2010 8:43:00 PM

Congrats BBF on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a great one to share with us all.. with luv.. Linda-Marie..

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 5/15/2010 2:15:00 PM

Nice tribute to the late great Jimi! Thanks for your kind comment!

Mitch White

Date: 5/13/2010 7:17:00 PM

Great one here Audrey GL in the contest- please let me know if the other Jimmy is receiving his USATODAY the address correction took place on the 12th

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/11/2010 7:59:00 PM

Great Acrostic Audrey and good luck in the contest .. u have captured his life in your lines so perfect... my entry is The Rise and Demise of "Jimi" ...luv.. Linda-Marie .. your BBF and busy BBF too..

David Byrne

Date: 5/9/2010 7:40:00 PM

very good

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/9/2010 11:11:00 AM

Hello I am friends with a woman who actually saw Jimi Hendrix perform. I used to like Atlantis - Full of Cheer. Nice acrostic! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/8/2010 4:16:00 PM

Really an awesome Acrostic, Audrey! Still got Jimi's guitar on recors an music cassettes!..Enjoyed reading your poem tonight!...And thanks for your comments, have agreat time...Love, Gert

Edward Orozco

Date: 5/8/2010 9:36:00 AM

beautiful poem!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/8/2010 8:51:00 AM

Awesome acrostic, Audrey. I like this clever approach to the contest and the last line is a great, truthful finish. Wishing you success! Love, Carolyn