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Jim the Trim

There once was a guy named Jim,
he trained at some cool dude’s gym.
With his daily work out
and his nightly bed bouts;
He no longer has hair now to trim.
                                  









With gratitude to Debbie Guzzi for her blog on Limerick.

KIM PATRICE NUNEZ
27 February 2015

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Michael Miers

Date: 5/26/2015 8:36:00 PM

funny.

John Williams

Date: 3/31/2015 2:32:00 AM

Hello Kim, Well written, made me giggle. Kind regards---John

Jack Ellison

Date: 3/5/2015 7:16:00 AM

Almost 80 and still got luscious hair! Some of us who have led a good clean life are treated with special favours! Loving hugs, Jack xxx

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 3/3/2015 4:08:00 PM

“ JIM THE TRIM ”, “ Quite right, sire...curtsy...curtsy...” thank you Kim, some of the time, I do interpret thing correctly. “ grab a glass ”, would love to !!! Never “ think it's crass ” my Dear !!! And why not ??? “ people here don't make a pass ” it would be good clean fun, a moment of transition !, even if just for the moment. Isn’t it where we are at “ having a nice old blast!... ”. Now that is past Kim. “ I'm on a roll! ” a roll on what ? Thank you my Dear, “ HUgs and smiles, sire. :D Kim ” Same to you Kim . B. J. “A” 2 ( Bill . )

Hija De La Luna

Date: 3/3/2015 3:34:00 AM

hahaha you made me crazy laugh, lovely Kim! thank you!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/3/2015 1:50:00 AM

hahahha.. :) funny KAbayan.. :)! never tried limerick.. :)! God bless s contest!

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 2/27/2015 4:28:00 PM

I see you have added another gem “ JIM THE TRIM ” ( just being playful ??? ) to your collection of jewels . B. J. "A" 2

Jan Allison

Date: 2/27/2015 4:20:00 PM

great humour Kim - made me giggle:-) got to say some bald me are very attractive like Partick Stewart - but the attraction there is his voice lol:-) Hugs jan xx 7 xx