Beautiful Scars Poet Limerick

Jim and His Fish-For the Limerick Contest

Jim And His Fish


 Limerick Contest
Sponsor: Jan Alison


Christmas was just around the corner,
Mother had the video recorder,
Jim fell in the toilet,
As mother records it,
Fish in his nose what a great explorer!

Date Written: December 24, 2015

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Paul Callus January 31, 2016 at 2:07 PM This is really funny, Laura:) Congratulations on yet another win:) ~ Regards // paul

Nette Onclaud January 31, 2016 at 1:30 PM you are so funny, lou.. sweet congrats on your win!..huggs

Hansteven Selfa January 31, 2016 at 9:02 AM Laura, Fantastic! Congratulations on your win in the Limerick Contest!

Andrea Dietrich January 30, 2016 at 1:55 PM you created quite the funny image, Laura Loo!! Congrats!

Dr. Upma A. Sharma January 30, 2016 at 3:30 AM Congrats on ur awesome winning limerick Laura..

Jan Allison January 29, 2016 at 6:35 PM Oh I love the pic and humour LuLoo:-) This would have placed higher but the syllable count was slightly off. Congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich December 27, 2015 at 3:35 PM haha. It sounded like he went down into the sewer and followed it out to a freshwater lake!! either that, or mom had just put the goldfish in there!! Beautiful Scars December 27, 2015 at 4:51 PM lol! either way Jim is out of luck! I think that Mr. Fishy just died and little Sally had a funeral!