Home » Poems » L Milton Hankins » Jilted

Jilted

So much for the lady from Toledo She had oodles of available dough She slipped quietly away One beautiful spring-like day And, I hear she has another poor beau. written June 14, 2021

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/17/2021 2:59:00 AM

Hilarity sells! You need to start selling these limericks, Hank.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/17/2021 8:37:00 AM

I need a market! LOL. No one would publish my limericks...maybe Jack Ellison's or Gershon's. I just write a limerick when I can't think of anything else to write. They come pretty easy when you stop to think about it.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 6/14/2021 7:03:00 PM

Sounds like you're lucky she's the 'slippery sort!' lol. Good one, Milt! Smiles, Gershon

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/14/2021 7:11:00 PM

Yeah, it just didn't pay for her to stick around with me. Thanks for the visit and the comment, Gershon. I'm glad I could make you smile.

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/14/2021 6:51:00 PM

Lol! L. Milton, Money talks. I enjoyed the read;-) Alexis

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/14/2021 7:10:00 PM

Thanks, Alexis. It surely does!