Jill in New York

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Poetry/Rhyme/Jill in New York
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Human Written

Written, November 02, 2024
For the International Contest, Jill Nursery Rhyme
Sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 11/18/2024

Third Place

Jill is getting tired of tumbling down that hill, so, she leaves the farm for the big city; and in New York every view gives Jill a thrill, till she is told, you are model pretty ! Jill works to become a runway fashion model, but is told that her walk needs improving; one day walking at class she felt like a noodle, and came tumbling down instead of moving ! Only to be picked up by a really cute guy, they fell in love within a New York blink; she sighed looking into his blue eyes like the sky, they got married, and Jill now wears furs pink !

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/18/2024 12:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Jill in New York" write/story. Love the pink hearts... Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................

Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2024 4:48:00 PM

Paula, thank you for the congratulations,compliment and comment, love Constance

Charles Messina

Date: 11/18/2024 2:12:00 AM

Very cute write, Constance. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie

Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2024 4:50:00 PM

Charlie, thank you for the contest and my placement, an for the compliment, and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Michael Tor

Date: 11/3/2024 4:33:00 PM

Jill is a happy camper now thanks to you Constance... Hugs

Constance La France
Date: 11/18/2024 4:51:00 PM

Michael, thank you for the comment, yes Jill is in furs now, blessings Constanc

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/2/2024 3:14:00 PM

Love the pick me up ;)

Constance La France
Date: 11/2/2024 5:48:00 PM

Kim, thank you, love Constance