Constance La France Poet Rhyme

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Poetry/Rhyme/Jill in New York
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Human Written

Written, November 02, 2024
For the International Contest, Jill Nursery Rhyme
Sponsor, Charles Messina, Judged 11/18/2024

Third Place

Jill in New York

 

Jill is getting tired of tumbling down that hill,
so, she leaves the farm for the big city;
and in New York every view gives Jill a thrill,
till she is told, you are model pretty !

Jill works to become a runway fashion model,
but is told that her walk needs improving;
one day walking at class she felt like a noodle,
and came tumbling down instead of moving !

Only to be picked up by a really cute guy,
they fell in love within a New York blink; 
she sighed looking into his blue eyes like the sky,
they got married, and Jill now wears furs pink !

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Paula Goldsmith November 18, 2024 at 12:35 PM Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun "Jill in New York" write/story. Love the pink hearts... Have a fun day with your win as you write away.................. Constance La France November 18, 2024 at 4:48 PM Paula, thank you for the congratulations,compliment and comment, love Constance

Charles Messina November 18, 2024 at 2:12 AM Very cute write, Constance. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie Constance La France November 18, 2024 at 4:50 PM Charlie, thank you for the contest and my placement, an for the compliment, and congratulations, blessings, Constance

Michael Tor November 3, 2024 at 4:33 PM Jill is a happy camper now thanks to you Constance... Hugs Constance La France November 18, 2024 at 4:51 PM Michael, thank you for the comment, yes Jill is in furs now, blessings Constanc

Kim Rodrigues November 2, 2024 at 3:14 PM Love the pick me up ;) Constance La France November 2, 2024 at 5:48 PM Kim, thank you, love Constance