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For Charles Messina's Jill Contest

Jill Has Chill

Jill is pretty as a flower
Still she has a super power
Her words can attract Jack 
Or really push him back
Her lie detector tall like tower
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:31 AM
Nicely done, Karen. congrats on the win
Jones Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 1:07 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Goldsmith Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 12:38 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your fun write. Now I know what a girl needs. A lie detector machine. Have a fun day with your win as you write away..................
Jones Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:23 PM
Lol Paula thanks
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:21 AM
Short but cute, Karen. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie
Jones Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 5:19 AM
Wow! I appreciate that placement! Thanks for creating a fun contest experience Charles!
Rodrigues Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:35 AM
Good one!
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2024 at 7:40 AM
Thanks Kim!
Rose  Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 6:05 PM
Jill sounds pretty smart lol, gl int he contest dear Karen
Jones Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 6:34 PM
Thanks Mystic Rose Rose!
Greenhough Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 4:36 PM
This is really good. I especially like the last line and how it explains the meaning. Good luck with the contest.
Jones Avatar
October 28, 2024 at 5:30 PM
Thanks Hilda!
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