Liam Mcdaid Poet Free verse

Jigsaw Complete

Two peas in a pod 
In blue awakening 
Senses beauty 
Different pieces 
In the one jigsaw 
Fitting together 
Perfect 

Sharing this 
A life together 
Joined 
pictured beautiful 
Drawing two hearts 
Joining together 
Becoming one 

To share 
In a life fulfilling 
Dream darling 
I applaud 
The missing piece 
Emotion in feelings 

Jigsaw complete 
The finished piece 
Goddess of love 
An angel upon wings 
In emotions 
a picture 
beautiful

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Kelly Deschler September 11, 2013 at 3:32 PM A great romantic piece of poetry! Fabulous work!...I actually had thoughts of writing a poem about my jigsaw puzzle of life being incomplete. But, for some reason I never wrote it....You did it very nicely!

Lucilla Carrillo September 9, 2013 at 2:12 PM This is some poem, a jigsaw puzzle that fitted complete. great poem and thanks for reading ( Emotions ). many blessings..... Lucilla Liam Mcdaid September 9, 2013 at 2:21 PM THANK YOU FOR THE AMAZING COMMENT DEEPLY APPRECIATED LUCILLA

Charmaine Chircop September 9, 2013 at 7:06 AM I love the way you transmit emotion in a feeling..I can nearly touch it.A jigsaw puzzle formed as two hearts become one..that s beautiful ..really is Liam Mcdaid September 9, 2013 at 11:15 AM WHAT FOR ME IS BEAUTIFUL YOUR COMMENT ATTACHED THANK YOU DEEPLY HEARTFELT APPRECIATED

Kim Van Breda September 9, 2013 at 5:36 AM Love this Liam-- what a stunning portrayal of passion and metaphoric references. Liam Mcdaid September 9, 2013 at 5:48 AM YOUR WORDS STUNNED ME BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU EVER SO MUCH DEEPLY APPRECIATED