Jewelry Notebook

"MARRY ME" -- The Sweethearts Valentine Candy

I write with passion in every line,
A poet bleeding words, in black and white

Elegant, like a fine glass of red wine.
I SIT!
I LAY!
I LOOK INTO YOUR KNIGHTLY EYES!
Pearly paper I unwrap the magazine
I switch the lights to read
Gently I kiss you on the cheek
Tonight my diary reads, LOVE

I walked away, bathing for the night
A beautiful purple Amethyst diary on the nightstand.

The unthinkable; -O' you opened to read

Page 1 - 50 dramatic, and set
You skipped on over to the day we met.

Page 88
Once I was lost in the twilight 
Then I magically found a box of invisible light
There you stood like a diamond ring; 
Suddenly my heart began to sing
Your love was more than the beauty that spawned from your soul
Fair and cold like winter blues
January stars following my every move
I treasure every moment we spend like my mother’s cameo
I lifted our memories and time framed them like yesterday
A vintage picture, no one can erase or take away.

Page 55
You skipped back and, opened a page that spoke about my broken dreams.

Page 66
Smeared cobalt words in every line  (CRYING) 

Page 77
Sapphire Glamour of fancy words
Phrased that I finally found my amulet
He will protect me with unspeakable powers.

Page 99
Moonstone & Opal = 4ever 
My white shiny Pearl, listen to me whatever

SLAMMING the diary shut!!
A piece of paper fell, and you bent over to pick it up.

Your heart skips ---- (when you read your name)

Dear Diary!
The roads ahead are full of bumps and screams.
I will continue to open every door until I find my dreams.
My sweetest love, soon will come, 
May he never dares  to change me like the seasons.
My sweetest love, soon will come
Together well enjoy  life and respect its reasons.
A sexy man!! 
Will come and intrude the glossary of my life!
My sweetest love, soon will come
One day to make me his wife
Today I will write and smile about love

Page 111
I have no shame in asking the man who stops 
By to sneak a peek and read my diary once a week
Will You MARRY ME????
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 1:28 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Linda.
Kimathi Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 6:42 AM
Hi Linda. Congratulations for your winning piece! As always, you rock with your creativity! ^_^ <3 One Love, Teddy.
Andresen Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:03 AM
- Linda, congrats with your winning poem - A superb 2nd place !!! - Enjoying reading your poem - Have a lovely Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Mehta Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 5:56 AM
This is a nicely penned poem, congrats on the win,
Konos Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:21 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
A. Sharma Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:56 AM
Great idea n a superb write Linda! Congrats on huge win!
Yvonne Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 9:31 AM
Congratulations Linda on your fine win.
Allison Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:33 AM
love the diary idea Linda unique write - congrats on your fine win:-) hugs jan xxx
Ryerson Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 7:36 AM
I'm coming I'm coming! I'll bring the ring with me of course....This should have placed #1 in my not very humble opinion...
Bordner Avatar
September 7, 2014 at 1:43 AM
You have too much courage to wait for questions Linda. Your heart is romantically impatient, your hopes as strong as diamonds. " Together we'll enjoy life and all it's reasons..." that's warrior love. I'm also charmed by, " Today I will smile and wtite about love" I like your diary. J.A.B.
Gasun Avatar
May 12, 2013 at 10:21 AM
Reading this marvelous write of yours ones again my dearest sis makes me feel great tonight (& of course including your new posted stellar poems) will send me to bed with both great & wonderful feeling most especially, seeing this one also in the winners list. MY BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS! Big big hugs! Thank you so much for everything! Good night & God bless you & your family! love always & 4evr, Leonora
Seal Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 8:28 PM
Congratulations my Sweet Dark Friend, don't you know it's the man that does the asking, though I would agree they need all the help they can get lol Take care, Richard
Jordan Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 6:43 PM
One of he many things I enjoy about your writing is that it is enormously inventive, be it structure, as here, use of the language, mood... Congrats on the win. Much deserved... Jack
May Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 2:46 PM
congrats on a fine win Linda
Widjanarko Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 9:56 AM
Congrats on your win to Lindaa :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny
Oyewole Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 7:25 AM
Congrats on your deserving winning quill... Every lines was great. Thanks for the upliftment. You're who you are to me~A.O
De La Croes Avatar
May 7, 2013 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations, Linda!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 8:22 PM
Hey Linda, I am so honored you entered my contest, great job and pleasant surprise to see your name come up. Half the excitement of judging is seeing who wins once the contest is posted.
A   Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 8:22 PM
yeah meeee.... Thanks for the win.... Richard :-) xox~ Linda
Jones Avatar
May 6, 2013 at 8:14 PM
Stupendous Linda...congratulations....
Gasun Avatar
October 17, 2012 at 8:07 PM
Wow! Huh!! This is so wonderful but a tremendous write my dearest friend PD. So glad to pick this one. What else can I comment to my greatest greatest poet? I've just read your comments on my inboxes and thank you so much for re reading my first poem, your support in my contest and others! About my friend and sister, Sallie? She's sweet also like me.LOL We still communicate but she has a family now. Her parents who adopted her also had considered me as their princess (like we're sisters) .hugs
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 9:46 PM
now you gotta go take my quiz. But you might want to be careful about revealing names until you know what it all means!!
Dietrich Avatar
January 28, 2012 at 9:46 PM
Priscilla was my cat only until I left Iowa for college,never to return. She turned into everybody's cat at the old family house. And lived with mom until she "croaked" about 15 years after I left home. My mom told me that story of how she died. Yes, my dang husband made me give up my wonderful OLLYVER dog. I cried and cried over that. I think Ollyver came to me in a dream when he died a few years later (he'd been adopted by someone at Pet smart. wish i knew who) Luv, Andrea
Dufresne Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 5:06 PM
how could anyone make this up? It's gotta be real! great story and well executed PD. Riveted my attention
Minardi Avatar
January 18, 2012 at 6:24 AM
This is beautiful. As if you read a novel. So many stories inside. Great job, dear P.D. :)
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