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Jewel That Took the Crown

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A coral pink design on glistening ruby tapestry-- Reminiscent of ingenuity of sculptor's blueprints In scarlet-orange tinges and teal-green imprints Hanging spectacularly in the cosmic art gallery. You are the brushstrokes of Florentine artistry-- Verses of poetry scripted in ornate vocabulary Articulating the vision of a star studded galaxy Flying in the universe on wings of your beauty. The scent of purple heliotropes you often vied for Lingers in search of your golden yellow persona Since you left the earth floating on dream clouds Ingesting dusty gases to forge your own replica. Jealous are the stars of your blushing rose motif Shaped like a monarch besting your surroundings, An ornament you are, flashing your royal charm-- Jewel that took the crown from dying supernova. June 10, 2019 Placed 3rd: Your choice (7) contest by Brian Strand Placed 3rd:Nifty named nebula poetry contest by William Kekaula Picture 1: The butterfly

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Valsa George

Date: 1/30/2022 2:37:00 AM

I was wondering what jewel could be that took the crown. After reading your poem, now I clearly understand...! What an astral beauty you have painted in words.... ! You are an artist , nay a painter cum poet. How well the colors, the words and the image blend. This goes into my fav.

Angela Crabtree

Date: 11/24/2020 10:24:00 AM

Both a beautiful portrait in picture and words, Vijay :)

James Inman

Date: 10/26/2019 10:40:00 PM

Beautifully written Vijay. I used to use this image as a wallpaper on my phone.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/24/2019 10:45:00 AM

Congratulations to a fantastic poet and human being, Panagiota

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/24/2019 2:43:00 PM

Much appreciate Panagiota--many thanks.

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 6/23/2019 3:00:00 PM

Beautiful, Vijay. Your vivid imagery brings this to life. Congratulations!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2019 3:24:00 PM

Thank you Sandra..much appreciate.

Robertina B.

Date: 6/21/2019 7:07:00 AM

Congratulations on number one, Vijay.. Your imagery is spectacular and so descriptive.. Your creativity is a beacon of light.. Shines like a diamond.. Superbly written and beautifully expressed, my friend.. This one is a fav for me!! Have a blessed day..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/22/2019 8:23:00 AM

Much appreciate Robertina..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/20/2019 3:59:00 AM

Nice to see this number one Vijay.congrats. Tom

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2019 7:37:00 AM

Thank you for the return visit Tom..much appreciate, as always.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 6/19/2019 9:44:00 PM

This is fabulous, such a beautiful verse you created , "an art gallery" is where this painting of words should be placed... no wonder it is shining on the crown of poetrysoup like a jewel. A monarch indeed. Congratulations Vijay.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2019 7:37:00 AM

Appreciate this cheer from someone like you who writes great poetry..many thanks, Debjani.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/18/2019 8:35:00 PM

Congratulations Vijay, for reaching number one on the Chart of Best Poems. You truly are an Artist. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2019 7:35:00 AM

Much appreciate your pleasant feedback..many thanks, Brandy.

Judy Ball

Date: 6/18/2019 7:52:00 AM

Excellent Vijay and usual. Looking at such a beautiful thing words tend to fail me but you have described this beautifully. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/20/2019 7:34:00 AM

Much appreciate your kind remarks, Judy..many thanks.

Joseph May

Date: 6/15/2019 7:52:00 AM

Dropping back with my Congrats on your win Vijay

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2019 8:55:00 AM

Much appreciate, Joseph..many thanks for your visit and comments.

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/15/2019 5:26:00 AM

Splendidly done. It can do none else but win dear Vijay, xo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2019 8:54:00 AM

Much appreciate Pixie..many thanks.

Brandy Nicole

Date: 6/14/2019 6:49:00 PM

I enjoy watching your words blend, as You Paint the Sky again and again. With Brilliance. Congratulations Vijay, on this win. :) Brandy

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2019 8:54:00 AM

Always happy to read your feedback, Brandy..much appreciate..many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/14/2019 3:01:00 PM

- Really beautifully written, Vijay - Congratulations X 2 ... this ruby deserved its first place :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2019 8:53:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise--much appreciate.

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 6/14/2019 1:20:00 PM

Wowwww what a brilliant intellectual poetic poem on the rosette nebula. Congrats on winning for this astral beauty in words. We ESP admire the Rosette nebula coz it's mentioned in our Holy book. God the sculptor you meant. Kudos . Pls pleez do review/ comment my newest poem too.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/15/2019 8:53:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, S. zaynab.

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/14/2019 4:41:00 AM

Wondrous poem, Vijay, love the journey..

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2019 7:25:00 AM

Much appreciate your visit and comments Harry..many thanks.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/14/2019 12:54:00 AM

Calling back with congrats dear Vijay, a great win for a breathtaking write. Hugs, Jennifer

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2019 7:25:00 AM

Thank you Jennifer for your return visit..much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2019 3:02:00 PM

totally engrossed by your shimmering display of poetry through visual art, vijay... double congrats on your fine wins!...huggs

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/14/2019 7:24:00 AM

Much appreciate, Nette..many thanks.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 6/13/2019 12:26:00 PM

A deserving write. Congratulations on your win. The title captured my attention :)

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:35:00 PM

I'm glad you stopped by..much appreciate Swetha..many thanks.

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/13/2019 10:54:00 AM

Lovely, Vijay. Congrats on your podium finish.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:34:00 PM

Much appreciate your visit and comments Line..many thanks.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 6/13/2019 6:38:00 AM

Excellent write. Very descriptive, Enjoyed reading it, Thanks for sharing it.

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:33:00 PM

Much appreciate Ravi--many thanks.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2019 7:05:00 PM

very nicely done. THis is so descriptive, Vijay. Congrats on the win

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:33:00 PM

Thank you Andrea..much appreciate.

John Hamilton

Date: 6/12/2019 6:13:00 PM

Congrats Vijay a spectacular write with amazing imagery, a fitting description of the eternal beauty of this nebula!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:32:00 PM

I appreciate your visit and kind feedback John..many thanks.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/12/2019 5:53:00 PM

Vijay your entry is spectacular! Your high placement in this contest is very deserved my friend! This is a stunning masterpiece! Congratulations! : ) xxoo

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:32:00 PM

You are so very kind, Connie..much appreciate..many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/12/2019 4:11:00 PM

Beautiful imagery of poetry and art! Congratulations m Vijay!

Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2019 2:31:00 PM

Much appreciate ..thank you Kim.