Line Gauthier Poet Concrete

Jewel In the Sky

o how
                                    i love the
                            gentle shape 
                        of a crescent
                    moon overhead
                 hanging in the sky
                amongst the stars
                 how I adore the 
                    idyllic shape of 
                        a crescent moon 
                            way up high
                                    in amongst 
					       the stars




Submitted on February 24, 2022 for A BRIAN STRAND VISUAL CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

AP: 3rd place 2020

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Paula Goldsmith March 1, 2022 at 8:53 AM Congratulations on your win. Your "JEWEL IN THE SKY" is a wonderful write and shape. I Love the sky with the moon/stars. Have a blessed day with your win................... Line Gauthier March 1, 2022 at 9:12 AM Thank you, Paula for much appreciated visit and comment.

Panagiota Romios May 23, 2019 at 4:39 PM Deep and eloquent, as are you. Panagiota Line Gauthier May 23, 2019 at 4:51 PM Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Panagiota.

Timothy Mcguire May 13, 2019 at 11:12 PM Wonderful! Line Gauthier May 14, 2019 at 8:08 AM Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Timothy.

Caren Krutsinger May 12, 2019 at 4:52 PM What a fantastic concrete poem! This went to my FAV list, Line. Line Gauthier May 12, 2019 at 10:00 PM How sweet. Thank you, Caren.

Gershon Wolf May 12, 2019 at 3:05 PM Smooth as concrete -- and soft as a moonlit night. Gorgeously done, Line. Happy Mother's Day to you. :) gw Line Gauthier May 12, 2019 at 4:41 PM Thank you so much, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Andrea Dietrich May 11, 2019 at 2:01 PM so pretty, you could hang a star on it! Line Gauthier May 11, 2019 at 8:30 PM What a lovely idea, Andrea.

Briauna Brown May 10, 2019 at 7:49 PM Beautiful presentation! Very creative! I enjoy this poem. XOXO - Briauna Line Gauthier May 10, 2019 at 10:35 PM Thank you, Briauna. Much appreciated.

William Kelii Kekaula May 10, 2019 at 7:18 PM A cool gem indeed, Aloha @wk Line Gauthier May 10, 2019 at 10:36 PM Thanks, William. Much appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos May 10, 2019 at 12:04 PM I have my curtains open in my little poetry corner and your crescent moon is almost as bright as the one shining in our South African sky. No stars though, too much air and city light pollution! Great poem. Hugs, Jennifer. Line Gauthier May 10, 2019 at 10:38 PM How wonderful that my moon is making its way around the world all the way to South Africa. The magic of the technology! Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Jennifer.

Elizabeth Kinch May 10, 2019 at 8:43 AM Beautiful words and amazing presentation Line. Line Gauthier May 10, 2019 at 9:04 AM Thank you so much, Elizabeth.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart May 10, 2019 at 8:16 AM Lovely done! xomo Line Gauthier May 10, 2019 at 9:05 AM Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.

Ann Gilmour May 10, 2019 at 2:35 AM The moon is indeed a most precious jewel in the sky and the imagery and beauty of your words and shape are exquisite Line - a FAV for me - thank you! Kindest thoughts Ann xx Line Gauthier May 10, 2019 at 9:05 AM Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Ann.

Panagiota Romios May 10, 2019 at 12:10 AM This is so beautiful, Line! In construction and in content))) Panagiota Line Gauthier May 10, 2019 at 12:28 AM Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.

Michelle Faulkner May 9, 2019 at 11:39 PM I can never figure out how to do a shape poem; this is so graceful, both in form and content- Line Gauthier May 9, 2019 at 11:54 PM Thank you, Michelle. I'm sure you could figure it out... LOL