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Jewel In the Sky

o how
                                    i love the
                            gentle shape 
                        of a crescent
                    moon overhead
                 hanging in the sky
                amongst the stars
                 how I adore the 
                    idyllic shape of 
                        a crescent moon 
                            way up high
                                    in amongst 
					       the stars




Submitted on February 24, 2022 for A BRIAN STRAND VISUAL CONTEST sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 1ST

AP: 3rd place 2020

Originally posted on May 9, 2019

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 3/1/2022 8:53:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "JEWEL IN THE SKY" is a wonderful write and shape. I Love the sky with the moon/stars. Have a blessed day with your win...................

Line Gauthier
Date: 3/1/2022 9:12:00 AM

Thank you, Paula for much appreciated visit and comment.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/23/2019 4:39:00 PM

Deep and eloquent, as are you. Panagiota

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/23/2019 4:51:00 PM

Thanks for the lovely visit and compliment, Panagiota.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 5/13/2019 11:12:00 PM

Wonderful!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/14/2019 8:08:00 AM

Thanks for your much appreciated visit and compliment, Timothy.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 5/12/2019 4:52:00 PM

What a fantastic concrete poem! This went to my FAV list, Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2019 10:00:00 PM

How sweet. Thank you, Caren.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/12/2019 3:05:00 PM

Smooth as concrete -- and soft as a moonlit night. Gorgeously done, Line. Happy Mother's Day to you. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2019 4:41:00 PM

Thank you so much, Gershon, for your most appreciated visit and compliment.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2019 2:01:00 PM

so pretty, you could hang a star on it!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2019 8:30:00 PM

What a lovely idea, Andrea.

Briauna Brown

Date: 5/10/2019 7:49:00 PM

Beautiful presentation! Very creative! I enjoy this poem. XOXO - Briauna

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2019 10:35:00 PM

Thank you, Briauna. Much appreciated.

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/10/2019 7:18:00 PM

A cool gem indeed, Aloha @wk

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2019 10:36:00 PM

Thanks, William. Much appreciated.

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 5/10/2019 12:04:00 PM

I have my curtains open in my little poetry corner and your crescent moon is almost as bright as the one shining in our South African sky. No stars though, too much air and city light pollution! Great poem. Hugs, Jennifer.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2019 10:38:00 PM

How wonderful that my moon is making its way around the world all the way to South Africa. The magic of the technology! Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and comment, Jennifer.

Elizabeth Kinch

Date: 5/10/2019 8:43:00 AM

Beautiful words and amazing presentation Line.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2019 9:04:00 AM

Thank you so much, Elizabeth.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 5/10/2019 8:16:00 AM

Lovely done! xomo

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2019 9:05:00 AM

Thanks, Maureen. Much appreciated.

Ann Gilmour

Date: 5/10/2019 2:35:00 AM

The moon is indeed a most precious jewel in the sky and the imagery and beauty of your words and shape are exquisite Line - a FAV for me - thank you! Kindest thoughts Ann xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2019 9:05:00 AM

Thanks for your most appreciated visit and compliment, Ann.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/10/2019 12:10:00 AM

This is so beautiful, Line! In construction and in content))) Panagiota

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2019 12:28:00 AM

Thank you so much, Panagiota. Most appreciated.